All Comments on 'A Birthday Present for Mother Ch. 04'

I find your story to be very well written. I look forward to reading more of what happens between them and how he makes her more and more his slut and how he lets other see that side of their relationship.

This story just keeps getting better and better as it goes along. Keep up the good work. Maybe Mom could discover that her fertility issue could be corrected when she does the procedure for the embryo implantation. How about his former sub as the egg donor or even the desk clerk? Thank you again for interesting story and I'll be looking for the next chapters.

Your story is still great. I like what "Manimal" said a European specialist would be a good story line to add. They could marry in Europe.

Excellent story - keep it coming!

A great love scene along with being kinky.

Just a beautifully written love story

Thanks for the chapter

Its hot story in 4 parts... i read all

Mom imagines it's her own son "saying how tight I was and how he was glad I was his first, and when he came he cried out 'Oh Mommy'. I felt him, you, pumping me full of sperm and I screamed and came so hard I almost blacked out." I wonder how many mothers have fantasies of getting royally fucked by their own boy--tall, strong, good-looking, "young and hung and full of cum," with a fine fat cock that's always hard for mommy and a pair of hot young balls that never quit producing the semen that a mother craves from her darling baby boy. If such mothers just leveled with their son the world would be a much happier place. Filled with grinning young motherfuckers and happy, satisfied son-fucked moms.

Please continue.

I would love to hear more about this couple it was a very good read.

Please add more to the story.

DAMN, WHAT A STORY. DIDN'T WANT IT TO END AND THE AUTHOR HAS BEEN INACTIVE FOR ALMOST 7 YEARS. TOO BAD. SUCH A GOOD AUTHOR. SO THANK YOU FOR A BEAUTIFUL STORY WHILE IT LASTED! NO OFTEN YOU GET SO MUCH FEELING IN AN EROTIC STORY. THANK YOU ONCE MORE!!!

The final chapter could have been so much better. A great story plot with a lackluster final chapter! Also, there could have been so much more to explore as the dom/sub infant relationship had started to emerge.

Great story would have loved to see another chapter or so to continue the beautiful story

A wonderfull love story, but it lacks at least one more chapter, where you tie up all the loose ends, does she get pregnant (that seams like a BIG whish for her), does she fall in love with her son, do they live together in the same house? there are a lot of unanswerd questions here.

I wish this story continued for another 10-15 chapters.