All Comments on 'A Bit Of Rough'

by ShazzyB

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Faye_SkylarkFaye_Skylarkover 12 years ago
Quick and Dirty

I loved this little story! No wasting any time, just deliciously hard, dirty sex and lots of attitude.

A really fun read!

StrawberryJonesStrawberryJonesover 12 years ago
to the point

Very nice, to the point. I liked the beginning, how he grabbed her hand and just pulled her out where he wanted her. Its nice to be with a man that knows exactly what he wants, I felt that here.

I liked the turn at the end, with her thinking about her date night. Added a little bit of... i don't want to say romance but it almost made me jealous that I don't have date nights like that lol!!

Keep it up!

If you have time, read my first submission :)

http://www.literotica.com/s/cadillac-lunch

BellatrixieBellatrixieover 12 years ago
Quick and dirty...love it

My favorite part was when he grabbed her hand and dragged her from the club. Delicious!

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