All Comments on 'A Black Roundabout'

Really loved this - fucking HOT story. Loved how Lisa was converted to being a black cock slut, and then a black dyke owned bitch!

The story was OK up till the incest was thrown in.

Ever!!!

Your writing affects me like I'm a celiac. No wheat products allowed in my diet.

Loved it!

More chapters. The characters demand to be set free in new love. Lisa needs to express he love for Jake and Tim for Pete.

Couldn't you decide what genre to write so you tried to cover them all in a horrible mish mash of events. Pick one and stick with it

Your writing is fine, very good. Don't listen to the naysayers:)

Great story, would love more chapters.

Thanks!

Ed