All Comments on 'A Blizzard & the Night of Firsts'

as soon as they started playing that card game and it was strictly girl on girl i skipped the whole story shit was such a turn off thanks for throwing the story

Fantastically silly and over-long, but good fun and quite sexy. Some very amusing and witty comments from contributors!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

I loved it, and people throwing tantrums about it being long or 'strictly girl on girl' and 'skipping the whole story', I can only remark "good things really do come to those who wait!"

Patience is a virtue, and although I have been burned by being patient and giving a story a chance, most of the time it is very much rewarding! I would have loved a sequel, too bad you only ever made the one story!

Where did this author go? We need a sequel!

To be the most most unlikely event to ever possibly occur in real life, thereby the most unbelievable story to have ever been told, you certainly tell it with conviction. I'm choosing to believe, albeit jealously.

Wonderful story and I was very delighted when I read it. It would be great if you wrote more.

To the anonymous who said the errors are meaningless and those who focused on them missed the point, the point you are missing is that for some of us an error like "dairy ere" or "lied" when he does NOT mean "fibbed" brings our enjoyment of the story to a screeching halt just as surely as a cold shower. Our brains just simply can't ignore it.

I hope Cat was in the time of the month when she wouldn't get pregnant.

A beautiful story.

I liked the story alot but I really have to question your innocent ignorance about the outdoors. No compass, no matches, no GPS...........all that was pretty STUPID. If not for this occupied cabin you would have died.

Ridiculously unbelievable story, and yet, you never really know, do you?

A late teen virgin male being that good at eating pussy is even more unlikely than him going three times, or three overly gorgeous girls hitting that hard on him ;-)

That bit aside, this story is exquisitely well told. The language handling in what is obviously a secondary language is bordering on virtuoso, and the pace of the story is even better than that. So please WRITE MORE!!!

Love the story! What a way to achieve manhood! I'd love to hear the sequel, seeing Cat again. I'd be surprised if there isn't more to tell!

Beautifully written. Loved the story! You’re now one of my favourite authors. Blessings!

I just can't comprehend the feeling I got reading this story. I want to thank you so much, I wish I would have heard about the game you play when I was younger. It would have been great. Wow I can still feel this great feeling I got when I read the story when I think about it.

I had to knock off a star for the egregious grammar errors. "If I would of . . ." "So she lied back . . ." They were like dog poop in the chocolate chip cookies.

Wow awsome story

Too many grammital errors.

Wow, great story. I absolutely loved it.

Utterly ridiculous in a "Dear Penthouse Forum, I never thought this could happen to me..." way.

And I loved it. Grammatical warts and all.

Far, Far fetched.......you say that it is true. If so you are the luckiest SOB in the entire world.

I have never been so hard for so long, OMG!