All Comments on 'A Box, a Woman and Time Ch. 02'

full of surprises. Much enjoyed.

That should have read "second person" of course.

Another excellently crafted chapter. Loved it but, if I have a criticism, the sex scenes are not erotic (not for me anyway). I’m asking myself why. Maybe it’s the third person but I think not. Perhaps it’s because, while the description is clinical in its detail, the emotions of the players are not well exposed. Nevertheless, it’s good writing.