All Comments on 'A Boy in a Bar'

I loved the idea of the experienced woman choosing the 'youngster' over all the drooling businessmen. Hope to see more from this author.

Lovely, but isn't there a viewpoint problem here? How does he feel about his first experience? And why the fuck has he waited till 18; Lit. rules perchance? The old bard couldn't have blogged R&J here, I'd hazard.

I LOVE first time stories and this was done with style and taste. I was Amber as I read this story, choosing the younger man who would do anything to please me. I felt his nervousness and found it delicious. For one night, they are in love and it was beautiful. So well done, Tio. Bravo!

An 18 year old, friendless man sits alone at a table in a bar, nursing a single malt instead of his usual beer, eyeing the businessmen and women around him, and envying their sociability.

I fixed the first paragraph for you. You need an editor, man!

I really got caught up in the story.

Sometimes a dash of sensuality is hotter than a boatload of sex. Keep up the good work.

Grey

I wonderful story. I could easily identify with the characters. Are but with finesse.