All Comments on 'A Brother's 'Love''

The story needed more anger and violence. It was good up until the end when he started talking about how he wanted to remember his brother and how he was still family. He was right in the beginning when he said that it being his brother made it worse. It made the betrayal worse. It should have made his anger worse. <p><p>

If you werent going to show the wronged guy getting over his anger and moving on to a better life with a better partner (what you often did in your continuations stories and something I really liked very much), you should have at least show some repercussions wrt the brother. That the whole family seemed to be taking the brother's side was also a bit much to be expected to swallow. Why wouldnt the guy get upset at his mother/father/relatives for constantly trying to minimalize the brother's actions. Even if you are against physical violence, which I believe was warranted/expected in this case, you could have at least shown that the brother was an outcast from the rest of the family instead of making it seem like they thought it was the husbands fault for not forgiving and forgetting. <p><p>

Still a good story though. It made me really mad while reading it so I guess its a success by my measuring stick (provoked a response from me). Thanks very much for writing.

Pretty decent effort. I just can't accept his granting forgiveness to either of them. Ever. It was a brutal betrayel. The George character was all over the place. It could be undertood a person missing a few signals, but not continuously and blaringly obvious ones. He was wishy-washy throughout most of the story, then actually quite decisive and forceful, then wishy-washy again.

I thought this was a very good story up to the middle of part 4. Then, all of a sudden the emotions of George changed so much, and the story seemed to end too quickly. Her explanation seemed too easy, and she seemed to provide no reason for him to reconsider or for her to try to work out a reconciliation. I think both the younger brother and the wife got off too easy, considering the length and level of their betrayal. Why in so many of these stories does the family of the wronged party seem to support the other spouse? I can understand a little bit why in this instance they would support the brother up to a point, but considering the circumstances, I thought the mother's response was very unfair to George. I would expect a family to provide more support to their son. It left me wondering if perhaps the parents were involved in a similar relationship with each other, which might have led to Louis' proclivities and to their acceptance of him.

go ahead and divorce her...then abuse her as you want...fuck her and beat her any way you want ...she seems to want t omake it up well use her till you find a wife ...after all thsi is a woman you could beat with a whip if so desired who would just afk you wheb she could cum...go ahrad pierce her nipples ...her clit ...her cunt lips ...put tattoos all over her ...say whatever disgusting things you wanted ...she would let you ...just t o,ale it up to you plus its her personality....after all your mother will love that shes still around even if she has slut tattooed on her tit,,,so make everybody happy...when you finally find a nice lady ..just give her to another master ..after all it is her personality

good writing. good plot, but missing something.

It was well written though it lacked a certain emotion to me. As to the plot, it is one thing to forgive a cheating spouse so you can move one, but one that cheated with one of your family members, I cannot see that. For the brother, there can be no forgiveness, there are lines, for me at least, that cannot be crossed.

A good first effort, and I look forward to your next.

I agree, no forgiveness for Louis, the memory of what he destroyed would always be there. As a matter of fact, I think he should have stomped the shit out of him to put an exclamation point on the threat to kill him so the rest of the family, including the busy-body mom would have dropped the subject forever. You just don't cross blood, at least in my family. Louis would have been hurt, and hurt bad. As for his whoring wife, he did all he could under the circumstances.

The characters were caricatures and a little wooden. The brother and wife were TOO cruel and contemptuous, I think. The brother, in particular, was over the top with his disrespect of the husband and then swung completely into abject cowardice when discovered. The emotions in this story could have been very powerful but they seemed muted because the writer talked about them instead of letting us experience the emotions through the eyes and actions of the characters. Without the emotional context, I think the story has left everyone just a tad disappointed. Not bad for a first attempt though.

The story was well balanced with the characters getting what they deserved all in all it was a very good story.

A good story of a double betrayal with a fitting ending. The sex scenes were quite hot with nice little twists to them as the story wore on. All in all, an enjoyable read.

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There were a few things that just didn't ring right. The telephone call between Louis and Pat brought out no anguish in George.

You would think that he would have been in greater emotional turmoil and showing far greater agitation than he was upon hearing how his wife was abasing herself for Louis. At the least I would have expected George's stomach to knot up and twist upon itself but instead he just listens and then grows angry.------------------------------

Secondly, the family's position concerning what Louis had done seemed to be too forgiving. The mother gave no evidence of any harshness of judgement towards Louis, apparently feeling that being brothers was more important than Louis' betrayal of his brother. And even though she treated Pat as the daughter she never had I don't think any mother would be quite so forgiving as to allow any familiarity to remain between herself and the dishonored daughter-in-law.-------------------------------------------

Lastly, I think that the author could have worked the bathroom pictures and video into a family conference showing to everyone how debasing the behavior of Pat and Louis was thus ensuring their dismissal from the family with an appropriate amount of contempt heaped upon them.----

This story was an excellent effort from an author who can write really well and is capable of puting a cohesive plot together. I hope we hear a lot more from fdkman262.

You did a good job with this story. Please keep writing.

A great first effort. No wimps here!

It was a little sad at the end, but a solid and engaging story. This reminded me somewhat of a few stories by Charley_Ace where the wife is a closet submissive.

I would have liked to have had more exposure from the brother, more dialog from him after the confrontation. That he was essentially exiled did not seem punishment enough, considering his crime.

As for the wife, why did she bother to give any explanation? And why did the husband need any reasons? Their direct interaction could have ended when she was delivered to her parents. Dealing with her was easy, the relationship with his brother is more problematic and deserved greater attention.

to your "proper" writing career.Well written and no "wimping" out. The part that amused me was when he caught her one day when she was at the sink with her hands in the water and she could not stop him,but do you think she could have possibly taken her hands out of the water and stopped him!

submissive. She spoke of her limits to her Master which spoils the illusion. I agree with Salamis that George's relationship with his brother was the key area to explore. Pat like other apouses who discovered her secret desires (e.g., size queen, interracial taboo) failed to discuss it with George. She really had no excuse. George is exactly right that now that the genie was out of the bottle Pat would be looking for another Louis. You never ask whether she was still seeing Louis? Since Louis was the youngest child it is natural given his past history (e.g., hard time getting work) they would try not to blame Louis too much and hope for a future reconciliation between the two sons. I really did not like the ending because it makes George out to be a loser.

dont know what i was supposed to think as i havnt read your other work yet but i like this story especially the duct tape thanks

Twice in the story she states in different ways the brother took her against her will, ie, rape! At one point she said "he'd think I was a pervert but you made me like this when you first forced yourself on me." Nowhere in the story is the fact the brother used her as a toy, after having forced himself upon her sex wise. I am rather surprised that she is not treated mentally as a rape victim who is raped over and over, seemingly as a willing participant, much like the Stockholm Syndrome. Neither the husband nor the family confront the issue that the brother is mentally unbalanced and a sexual predator. This is a borderline BDSM issue, involving sexual acts, some mild sexual torture, and physical abuse (marks were left on her body). The exhusband is correct in his analysis of her in that now that she has been programmed for sexual abuse and he himself being unable to inflict it on her, that she will respond to the first man who trips her trigger on this. Much like abused women go from one abuser, then marry another. I dont care for the fact that the rape angle of the story was omitted so I gave it a low score. I am also afraid the husband was a bit to dense on knowing his own life and his wife and her behavior patterns, a year is a very long time.

your cue from other writers. Try to think about your own characters and imagine how they would interact.

As a first effort you done gooder than most anybody could expect. Quite well conjured and delivered.<P>

Your empathy was showing through tho - perhaps more than the severity of the cheating and cucking called for. A brother - I would have taken him to the edge of his life's loss mentally and physically for the extreme and repetitive disrespect shown. Forgiveness would never be in my lexicon and I would damn sure make my parents know the details of him taking her down [film or pictures] and the reasons why.<P>

Everyone who has been shat on is sad - for awhile anyway but for the family to even hint at reconciliation with his brother is an insult to their own intelligence as well as his.<P>

Author - given the heinous severity of the intended spousal humiliation - the brother is a monster in training for worse actions. Why would there be any slackening of anger towards him? How could he allow the family to harbor any warm feelings towards the son gone sickly bad?<P>

Quite a beginning Author - now someone should write an end to this wherein the accident the brother experienced seemed just to be that - then with the ex further slipping down the slippery slope of pain and base demeanment until all is lost - you know like life treats those who savor mental and physical pain into addiction until they keep needing need more to get as high as they once did.<P>

Thanks again Author <P>

With High Regard

mom was a blind fool who gave birth to scumbag brother.i think he let him off easy for his betrayal.how do you forgive a scumbag like that.

I suppose I am of the mind of an eye for an eye. I would have heaped all kind of hurt on the worthless brother and wife too. Look at it this way she lied to him for over a year. Now that's plain wrong. Me personally I am too paranoid to let something like that happen to me. So many people are out to get you. I'm not making that us. Some people think some people are fair game for anything they want to do. None of my wives cheated and I left all of them before they could but I had a good taste of people that were jealous of me using my wife and family to get at me. I would never use the excuse that family would not take advantage of you. I grew up with a family that was all smiles and would cheat the hell out of you if they could. Like his so called brother picked on his wife because he thought he had a right to fuck with a brother. Guess he was wrong. I don't really trust anyone but I am happy and I have a feeling of self worth because of it. The only person I trust is myself.

I would have liked it better if he had hurt the younger brother so bad that he would physically remember what he had done EVERY DAY for the rest of his MISERABLE FUCKING LIFE...Likewise for the FUCKING SLUT of a wife that got off far to easily...

What happen to the brother? Did he & Pat get married or something?

The ending show that the loser is the husband. It seem that the family never put that blame on the brother. Somehow, when I read it, I have this feeling that the other family members is putting the blame on the husband, as he is not so forgiving. I think the husband never mention Pat after 1 year could be because he is over her & don't give a damn about her anymore. But what happen to the brother remain a mystery?

At parts the story was a bit repetitious (his initial thickness in connecting the dots), while in some other areas I believe you missed an opportunity to explore further (more on her conflicts). But overall its an impressive evocative story which draws you in, and no formula - thank you!

This time I was bothered by one aspect -albeit a key one... <P>

I could certainly understand the rage over the brother's betrayal. In that respect I could understand his decision to ‘draw a line’ over his brother - as if he was dead. <P>

But why (as I see in many stories in Literotica) should Grace's culpability be considered as less severe than the brother's? In fact, in one major respect her culpability is IMO much more severe than the brother’s. She is the only one who ethically, legally, emotionally (so every one presumed) had voluntarily committed to be there for her husband - loyal and truthful, never to undermine his wellbeing. Her husband came to depend and trust her on all levels of his existence. Nothing of this magnitude of commitment is ever expected between two adult brothers...<P>

The notion which is used implicitly in the story that somehow her becoming addicted to rough sex and inability to stop it, could pardon some of her behavior towards her husband is IMO totally wrong. In fact, her “addictive behavior” bears no relevance whatsoever - to continuing the affair the way the wife chose. She knowingly exposed her husband to greater and greater risks - both emotionally and perhaps physically. She could have very well acknowledged that she couldn’t control her newly found sexuality, come out with the truth and allow her husband to make an informed decision about the future of their relations. If asked, she would have had to disclose the circumstances - but at least, under this scenario, she would have taken the responsibility for her actions, the marriage but most importantly the wellbeing of her husband - given the bad circumstances of course...<P>

Regardless of what alternative actions the wife could have taken, in face of her year long extreme contempt and dangerous (to the husband) behavior, I can not understand the “amicable” separation and divorce.

His mother and father are real winners to

shown by the victim.The minute family questioned him he should have disabused 'em of that notion.Couldn't even kick the slime in da balls??And a little psych work wid da wifey-say,"if some is good,maybe more is better?"-let her learn how rough it can be??Pistolpackinpete

not going after brother is just ridiculous... I don't know of ANY brother anywhere that would accept that... and I also don't know any family that would accept the little brother's either. Lazy, you didn't need to make your husband in the story get such a shit stick to make your story work. you don't need to go overboard.

In real life there would be a few dead bodies around, and that is exactly what EVERYONE would expect to happen. This author shows an extremely immature understanding of basic human behavoir, to the point, that this story is just a waste of time.

I'd have been a little more vindictive. No reason to let her have anything from the divorce, just her clothes, she threw away her rights to anything else. Expose the photos to family and friends if she doesn't agree. Brother deserved a little more pain as well. He should have kicked him in the balls instead of walking away. Mom and dad were amazingly insensitive to his pain, for the little support they showed him I'd have walked away from them as well. Best scenerio for him would have been relocation, to many reminders where he's at. New job, new city away from meddling bitch of a mom, easier chance for a new life. So it could have been a little longer to show his recovery. Still enjoyed the story though. May have disagreed with what happened but its your tale to tell.

The ending wimped out. The husband is a pussy girlyman.

His wife and brother betraying him is devastating but his mother taking his slut wife's side is just too much. At least his father stood by his decision.

"We parted as friends..." I'm sorry, but you lost me there. You have told a pretty harrowing story, but then backed out of it at the end. This is a story which will end happily for no one: a marriage destroyed, a family torn apart and you have ended with "we parted as friends" and "I like the status quo" regarding his brother. I'm not one of the "burn the bitch" types, but there is no way this man will be happy. The fact that you back away from the abyss indicates a good person and healthy mind, but you have done your characters no favours in this story by doing so.

But, it was well written, I liked the dialogue. You do many things well.

Thanks

To betray a brother like that? I don't care if the slut had a 'switch' a mile long. Family should not be the one to pull it. I agree, he did and should have 'died' that night. At that time there is no more family blood. As such, if allowable in location of story, the 'brother should have been sued for alienation of affection like any other cockholding bastard. Since his brother was so into the sluts grooming, personally I think a little shave for the brother (oops, wasn't that a pubic hair? Sorry.) would have been appropriate.

The husband over-reacted and is mentally unstable. The brother is a sociopath and perhaps that is genetically linked to why the husband has some type of mental illness. Certainly the husband should not have assaulted his brother and would have gone to jail and likely gone to prison since the state comes down hard on men that are violent and a danger to society.

It is illogical to think that she would allow the brother to sexually abuse her when she would not allow her husband to spank her. It is also illogical to think that after the husband avoided talking to her for a year that she would be so quick to meet him just to explain why. She would refuse to meet him under those conditions since it would be no benefit to her but she might agree to meet for marriage counseling.

Not only is DWornock a lawyer but he is also a doctor. I think DWornock's village called!!

Didn't everyone here know that Dwornock is a super cuckold spy, that has a law degree, is a Doctor, an Nascar driver, a nurse, has his PHD in Sociolgy, works for NASA, also is a congressman and works as an advisor for the president. And last but not least is an expert on the taste of his wife's lovers cum, but then he also is into incest. True, he is just so well rounded man.

do you mean FAT?

And both die of AIDS after suffering in terrible pain for a year while the ex-husband laughs his ass off.

a little cucky - brother needs to get his dick cut off in a hunting accident.

First it is very unlikely that a grown adult woman would not have known what her sexual proclivities and tendencies were. In this case mild BDSM which was lead up to by rough sex (making the woman feal like she was being taken as women over the centuries actually experienced when mauraders came over the hill and into the village). The author passes over how she was so unfamiliar with her own base desires. Second, only a very few of brothers would have done to their brother's wife what was done in this story. Almost none of those would have a good relationship with their brother for al their lives. This brother's actions are against all odds

Thirdly, it is almost impossible to believe that the two adulterers living in the same house as the husband would leave no evidence at all of their asignations especially since BDSM and rough sex leave a trail behind. The author would have us believe that the wife had not physical marks on her body from their activity and the brother left no cum laying around, on panties, nightgowns, shower walls or most definitely in her cheating cunt. Too many holes in the story to be believable.

In summation were I the husband and discovered the affair (probably would first hear of it from suspicious neighbors) I would find some talent to man handle the brother or as the gang members "tune him up" breaking two kneecaps, rearranging his facial features and the coup de gras would to cut his testicles off and sever his penis.

Possibly the latter pieces could end up in his mouth.

I would agree that on finding what he had done to me he would be dead to me.

The "tune up" would guarantee he would do that to another wife again.

Such that it rendered her incapable of bearing children. People with her mental sickness do not need to pass it on to their children.

Could the guys possible have wimped out any more? I wouldn't speak to any one in my family if they kept relations with that mother fucker. I sure as hell would never have let the slut of that easy either, but some guys just can't stand up for themselves!

I love it when the Sluts say "I do not know what came over me". Your a slut you see dick and you go to it. Very simple. Loser. As far as the brother goes I would have beaten him senseless. the parents are another problem. They took the side of the offender as far as I am concerned which is part of what led to the problem in the first place. I would have ditched them as well.

chick flick writer "we parted as friends' .. really do you even read the shit you are writing or is it just coming out a romance novel? fucked his brother for a year..... cane killed able over some fucking wheat and god smiling at him,and this bitch you wrote fucked his brother, and whats with the family all loveie doveie forgive him waa waa....mom needs a smak to the back of her head..your sons a scum bag huggie huggie time is over

I would have killed the little shit. If my brother had done that to me, they would never find his body. Luckily, my wife can't stand my brother, and she's already told him that he isn't welcome anymore after the last time he stayed with us. I support her decision 100%.

After he hit him, he made a hugh mistake! He should have kicked him in the nuts about 5 times!

...these people aren't family... The parents just pissed me off. If my brother or I did this to the other, most likely one would be dead and my father would be helping to dispose of the body... And my dad is literally my best friend (been running a business together for over a decade).

There are certain actions that just should NOT be forgiven. Raping/Seducing your brother's wife is one of them.

What is with this cheating he fag writing about "why?" Fuck why! You did it count you pay.

One night she just disappears. One day little bro loses his cock at the hair line.

Fuck this lets talk garbage.

DWornock is either a cuck spy or he's never been cheated on or betrayed in his life.

My earlier "Fratricide" comment still stands. Baby bro would have been buried so deep they wouldn't find him until after the next ice age. Wifey would know, but would have no proof, that she had helped cause his death.

He was amazingly stupid,he noticed many things that didn't click right.

There also is no mistaking that fresh fucked look.

just the odor of sex is very hard to hide,it is the biggest thing I didn't like about the story.

Authors all the way up to bestselling authors use it to contrive a set of circumstances to make the story work. .

doesn't even come close to balancing, which just makes it a poor read. If you had a brother, short of killing his children, this would be about the worse thing you could do to him. There is no way that the brother would live through this, and there is no way that the brother would EXPECT to live through this when caught. In most cases, I think both the brother and whore would end-up dead.

he would talk to her or after her confession not tell his mom and dad and make it clear if she is part of your life i am out.

a parent who sided with her is white trash, and we all know she is a white whore mother, or just average american women, and no i have no respect for women, fuck them till they earn it, see then dying to save men? see them rushing to protect there husbands.....nope media openly mocks us. and they rush to abortion clinics to kill your child to have her lovers and make you raise it.

bitter...no i just see the truth in this story, mom and whore....didnt give a shit about him......men have remorse, women regret, God wants remorse...

The brother is an unanswered question. We know there was a threat and a suggestion that he leave town but he is only mentioned once after the confrontation. Did he leave? If, not, why not? The note should have been more explicit and photos should have been taped to his body when he was dumped in the backyard. Like other readers, I do not understand why he was not dealt with more severely. A taste of his own form of punishment and control would have been a good lesson.

Mom? Moms can be blind when it comes to their children. If they weren't, not many of us would live beyond puberty. I would like to have heard mom's answer to her sister regarding Louis.

You had a hope of a story until George conversed with his "mother"; then it just fells apart & deteriorated into pure stupidity.

He was too "light" on both of them. I know it would have been rough on his parents but he should have done much worse to his brother. Now that I know it had been going on for a whole year he should have buried him out in the country somewhere and if his wife ever mentioned a word I would have killed her, too. Later he could have taken care of her, too.

we are all laughing at you annony, not with you at you!

If it was my brother, I would track him down and make him pay a much bigger price. The family probably would stop expecting his return after a few years. His betrayal was far worse than hers. He can find another wife he only had one brother. One who he had protected.

While it wasn't my brother who fucked my wife, family still got in the way. We were about to start having kids when I found my wife was fucking my previously best friend. Of course, I divorced her immediately to the dismay of my own family. Believe it or not, my parents and siblings took her side, because they loved her. You see, we had grown up together, she lived in the house next door.

When I refused to take her back and keep her in the family, my folks began ignoring me. My own father refused to speak to me, my mom wouldn't open the door for me. It took me about three months of that before I had enough. Living in just a rental and working for a company with branches across the US, I transferred across the country, 1922 miles from my former home. All without saying anything to anyone I knew.

It took them 6 months before they called, looking for me. Of course I didn't take the call and after listening, began deleting the messages. They were angry at first, but when I listened to one accidently four months later, both mom and dad were crying, hoping to fix things.

Did I reconcile? Nope. To this day, 11 years later, I've not spoke to anyone in my family. Dad died of a heart attack 3 years ago and no, I didn't return for the memorial. They have been cut off from me the same way they cut me out of their lives. I'm happily married again with two young boys that my parents have never seen.

I plan to keep it that way.

The brother basically rapes the wife, at least the first time, humiliates him for a year and leaves the wife a submissive slut..... How is he not buried in a landfill or at least given a beating a lot worse than one shot to the head and gut???? Wow, then author writes of how silly it is not to forgive him????? Wow, just wow that is pathetic......

"I didn't hate him, he's still my brother...? WTF? This is a huge betrayal. It's bullshit that anyone would still love a family member that did such a thing. Every family has a low life loser like this (brother, cousin, whatever). It is better to cut them loose like a cancer. I would have kept my promise to kill the little shit. Why have him wimp out at the very end?

Very realistic and well written.

It's easy for us, who have been burned,

to say the guy should have discovered

the betrayal sooner.

But the innocence and trust of love,

is nothing to be frowned at.

Just missed by us who have lost it.

So this is a good and solid story.

Thanks writer!

Why do these men lie to themselves and their wives. They obviously have no love for them. If they did they would sit down and talk and try to work things out. People make mistakes and love gives second chances.

Now the brother is a different story. He was an aggressor and a rapist. It would be a cold day in hell before he was forgiven.

Why are men such idiots and so inclined to completely fuck up their lives. Sure the wife starts it but they finish it off.

I totally agree with @ScorpioJJ...What he said about his brother was really "Bull". His wife was just his wife...His brother was his own flesh and blood, what makes the betrayal even more despicable and unforgivable. A good story with this very weak point...2*

It feels like they got off the hook way too easy... because they did. He doesn't hate his brother? lmao yeah right. You got to do better than that. A good revenge scene would've made it a 5. That nonsense about him saying he loved his brother was pretty stupid.

I liked your story but I gave it a 2 because it's so one sided, I can''t blame you for how you feel about your brother. I feel like that about my brother-in-law, however I didn''t leave my wife. we worked it out. Did you consider counseling and therapy for her. you don''t mention it, so I guess you didn't. so then how can you say you loved her? if you won't even consider trying to help her understand what and why she did what she did. People can change. I did heavy drugs and alcohol in my teens but I gave up the addiction. I''m seventy now and I''ve never been tempted to try them again. Where is your faith? Where is the love you proclaim to have? Where is your heart? "For if you can't forgive those who trespass against you. how can you expect the father to forgive you? I know this is fiction, I just want to give you something to think about in your next story. I had a dream of a cheating and selfish woman that I think would make for a damn good story, contact me and I'll give it to you.

Go Fuck yourself widowedidiot . You'd have to be the biggest sperm sucking Cuck that I have ever heard of . Slut cheats on him for a year with the slimey cunt brother . She deserves to be destroyed . The so called brother knives him in the back . Deserves to die in agony . I have four brothers and sisters in law . I love my sisters in law like my true three sisters . To me AND my brothers even the thought of touching one is incestuous . Sick and disgusting . NO forgiveness possible for either.

Right now, you've left both brothers in limbo; one need's a severe ass beating and the other need's satisfaction. Now finish it correctly

people are going to take advantage of you your whole life because you are a sucker. From what you said we can only guess that your wife slept with your brother-in-law. And you forgave her. Was it a long term affair? His wife cheated for a year! She's lucky he didn't bury her in the back yard. His brother laughed at him. He's lucky he wasn't castrated. Cheating is one thing humiliation is another. But you go ahead and be forgiving while your wife brings home the next guy and the next...I really feel sorry for your future.

Terrible ending. Otherwise a good story up to meeting at Friday’s.

Does not mean to forget, I enjoyed the story but I do feel as if the ending was a bit empty. The brother should have suffered some karma, the cheating wife needed some therapy since it sounded like she may have been suffering from a mental condition. Lastly the Mc should have gotten a break and won a million dollars or something. As it stands with the current ending the story itself just feels incomplete.

Just walked away. No. No. No.

Not with out blood and gore for the cunt wife and brother.

She was fucking brother more than husband.

Stupid.

...showed all the photographic evidence when mama tried to defend little brother or suggest getting back with wife. Picture is worth a thousand words.

Paul in Oklahoma

5 years pass. It's time for some payback. Nail the brother

"I don't think he'd understand my desire to be dominated and punished" - Did she forget when he tried to get her interested in erotic spanking and she shut him down?

"He took what he wanted and all of a sudden it was like a switch had been thrown in my brain" - Her husband gives her a whack on the ass, and she doesn't speak to him for days, but his brother "takes what he wants" and a "switch in her brain" is thrown?

Of course, it NEVER occurs to her to say something like, "I remember when you wanted to play with spanking me and I didn't want to do it, but I've been talking to the girls at work (similar to the excuse she used with the shaved pussy!), and I think I'd like to maybe try it."

@Mbgdallas - You CAN'T be serious! What is there to work out? She cheated on him, for a YEAR with his BROTHER! She showed a side of her sexuality that he knows that he can't meet, so will forever be worrying about her finding someone else to do it. His brother didn't rape her- you can't rape the willing! At the most you can say that he initially sexually assaulted her, but she almost immediately consented to it, If it was rape, then the burden was on her to tell her husband when he came home, not submit to her "rapist" for a YEAR!

You are waste of air and a shame for humankind. Get your head out of your ass everything your write is shit.

Hunt the brother down, then bring him home and kill him in front of your parents. Blood is the worst betrayal of all.

Blood or not, brother's don't do that shit. I would've wrapped his whole body in duct tape, twice. Yet, sad to waste duct tape like that.

According to the story, the first time the brother forced himself on the wife. She should have contacted the police or gone to the hospital and reported rape. Since she didn't, the family should have disowned the brother for his actions. George should have considered maiming him ( possibly hire someone to maim/kill Louis). In this case only death would allow forgiveness.

a loser............and he deserves it

2starrs

the only loser is your wife.....its a shame she married a cuckold moron

He had his revenge on both. He pushed the wife away and made himself happy in the process, as best he could. More revenge on his brother would only have burned his own soul. Live well, have a good life, and move on without those who betray you. I get it. Well told.

I'm wondering how HueDumbass2 managed to make it through life without a functioning brain.

You don't expect your best friend to screw you over like that much less your brother. Why would you? I don't think he's stupid at all other than not punishing Louis more than he did. I'd have woken his ass up by yanking that duct tape off his dick and leaving him to scream. Otherwise I liked the story start to finish

She was in a tough spot. She dealt with the situation about as well as could be expected.

I don't have a brother, but if I did and caught him with my wife, he would be treated as any other man. One of us would not survive the encounter.

In real life, the "forgiveness bullshit would go by the wayside. The brother would be lucky to be alive, and no normal man would EVER see him without kicking his ass. As for the slut, we just have another female character with allegedly no moral agency. Again, in reality, she's an adult and would remain just a bad memory. The real issue would be with the parents. If they are so morally vacuous as to try to push reconciliation with wither the brother or the slut, a normal man would be done with them.

Unfortunately, too many authors here seem to think that they need to write their wronged husbands as "nice", no matter what has been done to them. It's offensive, feminized male writing.

I see your stories were 1-bombed. All the 1 votes were from one religious retard making multiple Anonymous visits along with fake bios under the handles

26thNC, Harry inVA, thecarolinadreamer, Lakeeriegoatguy, KittyCampbell, Mattenw, ShadowRosie, WarGamer, Impo_58, Impo_61, Impo_64 etc., also possbly Rw43, Odiouser and Patillie among others.

This person votes multiple 5's to put a mediocre author in hall of fame for his revenge stories cutting off nuts etc., and then 1-bomb's good stories that express sexuality or cheating.

You will find repetitive comments from this person across 50% of the writers/stories in the LW category - "idiot", "garbage", "sewer", "fag", "worst writing" etc. - how can they all be the worst stories or worst writing?

In one of the bios and comments this person claims he was cucked twice but I suspect he never had sex with a woman at all and his comments express a lot of anger towards women, calling them garbage cans.

By the way, this person is a Trumpite running the same play book as Trump and his child molester fakes like Matt Gaetz - they claim to represent 90% of the people as a "majority" but it is just one person trying to destroy the world.

I would not have characterized myself as a Democratic voter, but for the next couple of elections I will vote against all the Republicans. That's the best way to vote where it makes a difference.

I wonder how many times he had sloppy seconds . Sadly one of My cousins cheated on her hubby . I got invited to a party at a bar I did not usually go to .. The Bar was about 2 hours away and that is how I caught Her Cheating on a good man . I am so glad for my camera phone it took some great pictures . He did not believe Me until he saw the pictures .

This is the most outrageous line in the story, "I suppose you're wondering if I ever forgave my brother? No. I suppose that's childish, and maybe it is. I didn't hate him, he's still my brother". That is so stupid. What he did was unforgiveable. I would have hunted him down and bet him every time I found him until he left town. He would be so ugly by the time I was through with him that no woman would look twice at him.

There are some very nasty women in this "Loving Wives'' category and not many actual 'loving wives' Along my way I have met a few myself and neither the characters in the stories nor the real life versions I've met do anything to persuade me there is much hope for the 'modern' woman I see much good in some females but it is always tempered with the knowledge there are some with serious 'issues' 3*** for this story Thank You. I agree 100% with the comment by 26thNC even though I have a brother.

You would think there were more stories about family betrayal. While serving out of country some years back, I remember listening to a buddy tell how he had learned from a friend (but not a family member) that his wife had taken up with his brother and she was pregnant with the brother's child...and his family seemed to be fine with it. He got a call into his mother to find out if it was true and she admitted that it was; and that he should learn to accept it. And that he should not hold hard feelings toward the two. After all, the child would be his niece or nephew and her grandchild. And if he was looking for someone to blame, just look in the mirror. He had been gone 8 months, leaving her alone. He asked how far along in pregnancy his wife was, and the answer was 6 months. So he had been gone less than 2 months when she started cheating.

Now, I thought how bad for my buddy...until I got back home and found myself in the same predicament. But, absolutely no way in Hell will I EVER make peace with my cheating wife or backstabbing brother or family that supports their actions. I lived 10 months with no truthful communications with my family. So I can move away and cut off all communication with those people I once thought of as family.

Looking at comments, I see that my idiot anonymous bitch has been commenting again. He/she/it has gone too far this time though. Putting me in the same sentence as HarryVag and odiouser is too much. I'm not familiar with most of the others, but they ain't me. This dumb shit is still bitching about Trump even after eight months of the Uncle Squint disaster. By the way, I had given this story a *5.

Good, until it died at the end.

Little brother began his affair with his sister-in-law with, according to her, rape. I'd go full-blown Cain on him!

He was too easy on them.

What the hell are you thinking of in those last paragraphs about his brother?!! Beyond forgivable. His brother should be fleeing to another continent to escape his wrath. Leaving his brother with a broken body, deaf, dumb and blind should be his avowed goal and his brother should be made aware of it. Hunt the fucker down and destroy his life as greatly as he destroyed your life , your wife's life and ruined your parents life. Forgive?? Remember the good things ? Are you sick, crazy or pandering to the "participation trophy, don't keep score" nitwits?

Way too easy for a years worth of offense. Forgiveness is not necessary, just total and complete indifference. He should have told the slut to shut up and stop saying sorry. The word sorry costs nothing and is meaningless when endlessly repeated. Mom also should have been forcefully warned about taking the wrong side and stepping very carefully with her words. There is no coming back from a years worth of planned behavior.

No real resolution. Everyone just walks away? Nah. Too easy