All Comments on 'A Chance Meeting'

I would like to see more of this story. How and where you are going to take it.

I like the characters. They each make a solid impression in a very short passage. I am curious to see what comes next.

This story was certainly interesting in that it moves along quickly, and ends up in a way different spot than where I thought it was headed. I'd read more ....

I was really into it. I like being controlled like that and the idea of a man coming to me like that in a coffee shop, I know I would have done the same thing your character did... nothing. I was almost turned off about the urine part at the end, but when i realized how it fit into the story I loved it. Please email me joelisthebomb@yahoo.com if you write another one, or if you just want to chat or whatever. I am really good at editing.

A well written story but for my tastes not as interesting as this authors two previous stories.