by sylviarockon
I was reminded of Un Homme et Une Femme. You managed to put heat and sadness into the story, along with a glimmer of hope. Thank you. This was a delight.
I really liked the story. Really well written and sensuous. Loved that. I realize one can fill in the rest of his life and it SHOULD include hers, but does it, in the authors mind??
Well written and with enough possibility of truth to help it be believable. Very good story.
fine writing. lots of surprises and twists in this thousand year old plot (a plot which is, in fact, a challenge).
I found it to ge a great read. I really liked it. Characters are so well developed and I'm really there with them.
My biggest concern is that the author of this wonderful story and several others seems to have stopped producing!
Nothing more to write? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Great story, well written. The language, style and plot were wonderful.