by escriterra
Um. I HAVE to tell my partner about this story! Thank you so much.
Very creative and well written. I loved everything about it. I only wish that I could have been Andrew.
just wanted to say this is one of the best strap-on stories I have read!
Another sexually charged story, drawn out long enough to paint the picture yet so enthralling that it seemed short! I hope the allusions at the end come to the fruition of at least one or two more parts in the near future? Thanks for posting...
Plainly she will get more practice at home.. but I hope she will take her place alongside the tribeswomen.. 100% rating by the way..
This was very well described! The background (an entire tribe doing this as a ritual and an anthropologist needing to get involved!) was a little contrived, I felt. However, once the story got going I was willing to suspend disbelief and enjoy it. :) Congrats on a very nice story incorporating a toy I've always been curious about!
Really hot, well told story. One of the best I've read here for strap-ons, especially getting inside Sherrie's head. Fantastic.
I loved it. Very imaginative. I have only done myself a couple of times but now I need to have a woman do me.
started out with a believable sexy premise and went on a typical wordy downhill slide from there. I read the first two pages with interest and mostly word for word, thinking this author has something going, but gradually started skimming, looking for the intellectual meat!! (as happens with most all of the literotica stories) Hopefully you will "get down there with the natives" on the sequel! Smiles and keep writing!
LMFAO - I didn't read past the first few paragraphs hahaha I couldn't stop laughing lmao .. NZ tribe taking part in a ritual like this?? had me cracking up laughing... sorry...judging by the other comments I'm sure it was a good story... but knowing that a ritual like this.. is not nor has it ever taken place in NZ... kind of put me off the story ... but however.. keep writing.. hopefully when I stop laughing.. I may even read the rest of the story lmao
Sexy, sensual, well paced, evocative and beautiful. I am a 55 year old man who finally submitted to a Domme's dildo about 5 years ago and have never looked back. She was immensely powerful and erotic. She too would invite other women to occassionally use her toy. About 2 years ago she introduced an 18 year old woman to man fucking using my man-pussy. That young woman, now barely 20, is my Domme now and it is immensely erotic to be used and controlled by one so young.
This story completely resonates with me and I have sent to to my Mistress, praying that she will use me tonight when she arrives home.
Bravo to a lady who gets it right and in the right spot! Incredibly sexy!
O.K. so the tribe in the story could have been better set in some other locale, but get real (sic) this is fantasy and graphic sexual fantasy as well! Accept it for the sexy and stimulating adventure it is!
"You want your dildo to slide past his sphincter with as little resistance as possible. You want to push into him in a way that lets him know it is absolutely inevitable that the fake cock between your legs is going to go deep inside him and that there's not one thing he can do to stop it. When there's a lot of lube in his asshole and on your cock, even if he's a nice, tight virgin, no amount of squeezing, of clamping shut, of trying to avoid your penetration is going to prevent you from sliding the entire length of your strapon as deep into him as you want."--Wow! The chance to experience a passage like that (was that a pun?;-) in real life and not just fiction would thrill me beyond measure; you'd be amazed with what your words up there did to my inner labia... (the only guilt for me came in that, I kind of loved thinking about the man being so powerless, even conquered a little in Miss V's description of how he should be taken); but worry or no, I'm still glistening; also paying special attention to Sherrie's ongoing little saga here; I love her combination of shyness and this huge, undernourished but still *undeniable* desire she has to slowly, deeply fuck a man into total surrender and heavenly orgasms for them both; I certainly hope her desire will have its way in the end;
Of all her blindfolded beaus so far, I think I like Andrew the best; your descriptions of his lovely penis, so pink, and the responses he goes through; all his beautiful pulsations and moments of release...I imagine he must feel so tender, so sexy, so snug and inviting inside, and I do thank you as a woman reader; it's also super nice to see so many men are following your writing and clearly open to this as well--more than I think most women ever imagine, (if they imagine); I want Sherrie to get the chance to ass fuck a man she really knows and cares for now; that feels overdue. Lastly, I'm wondering if you can write her additional chapter(s) without anymore references to Deep Throat; it was/is a virulently misogynist "film," I don't like the way men still bandy the terminology from it around, and, as a woman who treasures female dominant sexual fantasy, it just made me feel angry and yanked me out of all the fun & pleasure my vulva was otherwise getting from Sherrie's exploits; Anywits, thank you, & glad to know you haven't lost interest.
Those perverted Pommy asswipes always spreading their perversion. Damn sickos! "1*" !!!!!!!!!
Love the female point of view and the attention to detail. The source of many orgasms already.
While you are an Excellent writer, the story is just tooooo long.
This made me cum--three times, I think, may have lost count--I'm a guy, btw.
Well done in every way. I would love to see our heroine explore her new fascination without her instructor. Maybe among her students?
Getting spread and fucked up the ass is wonderful. A dildo isn't as good, but when there's no cock around, it will do.
The best, well written never faltered love it!
Great story and enjoyable read but your geography is incorrect. Aboriginals are native people from Australia and not New Zealand.
Erotic as all/anything I have ever read or experienced!
You have inspired me to search out my own feeldo and an erotic man to experience this with. It reads as an Amazing experience leading to an extreme, incredible climax. And the thought of being paid to do this to a man-- Intense. Thank you for the education. Hot! Ummmmm Yessssss Ahhhh. Uhmmm.