All Comments on 'A Couple Brought Together Act 01'

Thank you for bringing us this really well-written and literate piece of work, realvelvetglove, it was quite exceptionally good. I eagerly await Act 2 and please post it for us soon. Five stars seems little reward for such story-telling ability. Very well done

Well written and very gripping, I'm one of those who don't fantasise about a man submitting in any sense, yet the story seemed to captivate me and draw me in to reading past the part i would usually think, oh no not for me this one and click out.

Thank you and i look forward to seeing where you take this story.

5 stars, well deserved.

Good start, please continue your story. It is very promising.

Have fun!

Besides toes I would have had the sub hubby clean my cock as well.

Wow is all I can say ..

Keep going! This is really told well, and slowly builds the anxiety and passion while being told.