by EZ_CUM_EZ_GO
Amazing. 5 stars easily.
Loved the pace and the build up, christ it was good
took my time reading this, and needed too LOL fingered myself off to 3 seperate orgasms....wow.
Top writing. Fuck it I'm feeling horny again LOL x
Would be even better if you fixed some glaring pronoun problems. Myself is almost never correct. It's Jim and my, not Jim and I's. Also purpler isn't a word; it's more purple.
Great development however.
what i would have done to be a fly on the wall for this party! very well written!
This was the best story I have ever read I came so much I kept stif for almost 3 minutes great story just amazing
My wife has never had a couples party. I have been completely satisfied with her coming home very wet and horny.
This story is hot, but the pace was too fast.
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Reluctance (on the part of most, at least) builds erotic tension. Less-dramatic toys could have preceded the sybian, swing, etc.
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Thanks for the fine story, though.
My wildest fantasies you brought out in this story. Love masturbating to these kind of stories. Totally fucking HOT!!! Thanks for the great orgasms!!!