All Comments on 'A Couple's Voyage Into Sexuality Ch. 10'

I enjoyed the series very much. I tried to ignore the spelling problems which often turned into "wrong word" problems - such as using fell when you meant to use feel. But the characters were lively and easy to believe. The dialogue was excellent and there was plenty of it. I wouldn't mine if the series continued just bring it to an "honest" conclusion - don't just write "The End"

Who is Arthur? Whoever read this before allowing it to be posted must have been high or something because the use of pronouns is so screwed up it is difficult to know who is eating or fucking whom.

Love your stories. I wanked right through this one loved it.