by m_storyman_x
Some of your least inspired work to date. You write like a grandpa trying to be hip. Shame, you've done decent works in the past.
So... If I kinds liked this one more than the other one...
Don't get me wrong, I'm a sucker for a good romance story, but I'm also a sucker for a lighthearted raunchy little story like this one.
I think everything else aside, one of the main differences between your two xmas stories is the dialog.
This one has it, the other one didn't really.
In my mind, this was the better story... others might disagree with me, but I just felt the characters were more fleshed out here, the story flowed a whole lot better, and I generally just like the sort of teasing dialog in this story.
Some people like more realistic stories, personally I don't mind; I like both! Just depends on what you're in the mood for.
All in all, and while I know this was a one-off for the xmas contest, but this story leaves a lot of room for a follow up! Hint hint!
Love it. Shared this with my daughter and her best friend. We shared and discussed about how we got into our daddy-daughter fiasco. I did not realize the daddy worship that my daughter had while growing until it was brought to my attention by her best friend. She was 19 years old and in college at the time this all came out in the open. Her and her best friend had discussed and talked in depth about their daddy issues. When I 1st learned about it I had a few reservations. We all discussed for a wfile and agreed on moving on with the 3 of us. I will leave the imagination the outcome. I would not change any of where things went.
Hoping that he gets both girls pregnant over the Christmas break, and they wind up moving in with him….
Great story, loved 🥰 it, I am sure it is probably most men’s fantasy to happen!
The story was hot and worthy of 5 stars, but I can’t think of a single college that kept their students locked in when COVID hit in 2020. Most started closing their dorms, then tried to do remote classes. And it hit in the spring, not the winter.
Perhaps it would’ve made sense to say that you’re into 2022 already, and the restrictions meant that she couldn’t come home at the weekends… it could’ve even been that she went to a college far enough away that coming home every weekend couldn’t happen
Linking it to COVID was just strange, as that’s not how it happened
Horny reader me thought he should have relaxed his morals and done with both girls a lot sooner. Real person me probably would have held out even longer.
One thing, though. If Kat is 18, as the opening disclaimer states, then she is an adult and free to go and live where she wants and her mother's custody agreement should no longer be in force.
Collin4xxx: why? Women don't live just to have babies, haven't for a long time.
Some good hot sex. A little more would have been better. Carry the story through the rest of the 2nd day and have him finally give in and full on bang his daughter. Oh well.
The father's protestations needed to stop at some point ... was great tension-builder at the outset, but too contrived later