by yumacd
Really this is erotic? Really? It's just silly..no make that stupid.
I really enjoyed the quality of this story. I truly felt like I was inside the character's mind and felt his emotions. Certainly want you to finish this series, and I really want to read others of yours...you can spin a yarn!
Loved the story, can't wait for the movie! Not usually my genre, but just got hooked on the tale, one of the very best.
Hey, fun and interesting. I don't usually like cuckold stories (except the Goodhusband ones), but this is different enough to be interesting and sexy.
Great insight to how the characters are thinking and feeling...great creativity. Nice work.
I love how this is written. I also checked out some of the cuckoldress' videos. She is pretty amazing also. Please continue this story.
Hi yumacd,
This story is right up there as far as excellent pieces of erotica is concerned. Thank you. I don't even know if CH.2 has been written yet but if it has been I will save it for another exciting adventure such as you've just taken me on. I have never had any of the experiences you have described here and, at 72, I'm not likely to. Thanks for the wonderful ride.
Best wishes for your future writing.
Les.
You have got to be kidding me! A story this good and all this time has passed sin you posted this chapter and still no second chapter?
Please, please pleaase continue it for us!
I agree that this is a RIDICULOUSLY good story. You absolutely have to write the next chapter!
First time I've ever commented on a story. Besides being incredibly erotic, it's marvelously written. You have a gift. Love to know what you do in the real world You are a terrific spinner of of sex and suspense. Get me the goddess's number. I didn't realize how much I identified with the protagonist[hero?] thePEARL
Smack the bitches in their mouths and leave them on their asses. Who needs the humiliation? Stupid women.
Shit, this story is so awesome, please write part 2!!!!!
This is a typical mind game - the writer wants you on your knees begging for another story that will never cum.
How brain sick has that author to be?!
when is the second part coming??? and what is the name of the movie??
I would love to read more also, denial is so awesome. I just love the milking and no orgasm. so very hot/erotic
I say brilliant but you left me hanging ... I so want the rest of this story.
This fine writing somehow helped me to have some insight of what it might be like to be involved in a shoot. The erotism will come later but will involve this framework.
People who mindfuck others are nothing more than criminal predators. As for the victims, if you enjoy and refuse to seek counselling, you're so damaged that your life expectancy is zero - and I'm sure you'll go out with a smile and wet panties.
BTW, truly disheartening at your improper use of cuckold - bandying about using present-day feminist re-definitions and stratagems making men guilty of everything and women mere victims. Hashtag MeToo at an insane level.