All Comments on 'A Cumslut is Born Ch. 01'

Good Story I have never been with a beautiful shemale,It is a fantasy of mine.Thats my idea of a perfect woman that has nice

tits and a big juicy cock

I love a mouth full of CUM!! Good Story!!!

Julian, this story would have been much stronger if you had written it in the first person rather than in the third person.

Most transgendered (male to females) would not like being called "he" or "him".

Well done.. captured the emotions

I would love to suck your cock and drink your cum

I loved these stories! I love your beautiful descriptions of a nasty little cumslut finally worshiping his first cock and becoming a slave to its power! Very hot!

Seriously, Tonya should, most likely, be referred to as 'she'. While some transgendered folk might prefer their 'birth' pronoun, I am sure that most prefer the pronoun of their 'new' gender.

you should change the he to she. SHE is male-to-female Transgender.

bobbie

Question - why are you consistently referring to the shemales in your writing as males "he", "him", "his", etc. ??

For most people who read these stories, we refer to transexuals and shemales as women. Beautiful and in some cases fantastical ladies, who happen to be equipped with penis and testicles. Your writing is effective but this part really kills it for me in a mental sense because when I think he, I am automatically thinking something more like a p/t transvestite or a cross-dresser. Again, we're talking fantasy here.

If you fix this, I think the mental images flow together much smoother. I don't have an account here, so this is under anonymous but I'm on the site regularly, I assure you.

Thanks for the feedback! Chapter 2 is being approved still, and I am writing chapter 3.

That was almost a dream cum true! Just can't afford that! Thanks more please!

oh my god i wish i was Julian ,i was so horny reading this ,i must read more please .

let us have the next chapter soon please.x

Hope there is more to cum.