A-Cup Angst Ch. 11

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"Yes," she said.

"Good," Jamie said. "If you detect anyone approaching you before the twenty four hours are up, you are to wake them immediately and restore their magical powers to them." He turned on his heel and walked away when she nodded.

He had briefly entertained the idea of taking their magic for himself, but he knew now, for a certainty, that having magic would drive him to homicidal madness. He trusted the French to know how to handle an enslaved, vampire-draining vampire. They had Sylvie in their ranks, after all. He hoped they wouldn't send some sort of black-ops team after him and the permanently enchanted items in his possession. He suspected they would not be restrained by the illegality of their action. He put his faith in the warded jewelry keeping them in the dark as to where he was.

He got his mother and sister out of the cabin and into the Subaru. The mercenary followed them in the X5 and they drove off to the airport. He was going to charter a cargo plane to take them anywhere his mother chose, along with the two cars full of supplies. But the first thing they had to do was get out of the States and away from Section and the Johanssons. Jamie quietly mulled over where to fly first. He didn't want to go to the Bahamas, since he had killed people there. In his quest to destroy the Syndicate, he had killed people in Canada and Mexico, too. He bit his lip as he decided they'd fly southeast after takeoff, towards the Caribbean.

He sighed and gave the women a good look. "They're tough," he thought to himself. "Tougher than they look. They'll be alright." He nodded to himself. He was going to make absolutely sure of it.

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OpenWordsOpenWordsabout 1 year ago

Boy, you managed to turn this story into a streaming pile of shit in only one chapter...

OpenWordsOpenWordsabout 1 year ago

Just another pathetic cuck author. Having the protagonist share his women with other men. Cucks are not worthy of being the lead in any story. They let other men screw their women because sex at it's most basic is about procreation and cucks have inherent knowledge that they aren't good enough to pollute the gene pool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a load of crap! He didn’t do anything wrong! He never initiated violence, he only responded to the evil done by others. The girls stole his months/years from his life. Multiple people harmed or threatened to hurt his family. Others were hurting anyone available to feed their power.

You wrote that the French objected to him serving as judge, jury, and executioner. Well, the organizations that should have been stopping the evil, weren’t! So, they’re either incompetent or corrupt. Regardless, the person with the power to stop evil has the moral responsibility to do so. If he does it in a manner that’s so horrible that others reconsider their behavior, all the better.

The only thing wrong with the death penalty is that governments convict the wrong person. If you have absolute proof of guilt, and you know that they will continue to harm others, then the best thing to do is to permanently remove the threat to society.

As for wars, would you rather the evil people people rule the world because the good refuse to resist?!?

Your morality is messed up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well done

I am well pleased with this turn of events and explanations of previous behaviour. Well done! Good story, good storytelling.

Still if you ever rewrite this for publishing, you need to expand the story on how he sets up his Bastion and stuff: explain what can and can't be done with the magic he wields. Make the world you made more lifelike and believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Eureka!

Pg 2 - So that's why he was getting to be such a dark angry asshole!

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