All Comments on 'A Dangerous New Level Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
kinky, passionate

Anal sex with your lover is by far the best, when she is up for it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Oh my lord !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I would rate this 200 if I could . I was him every second of the story and felt what he felt each and every time . What a talent you have . I hope you are writing screen plays or novels or T.V.shows , if not you're a fool .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Still could have lost the anal, but...

I did rate it a 5. Especially liked this and chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
hotttttttttttttt

that was a realy hot story

the only part i didn't like very much

was when she fucked his ass

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
so-so

the begining was unrealistic no guy would stay around his sister when he was so shy and afraid to be around her chapter 2 was a little better but not much no guy would let her go on dates just for appearances he would be to jealous and it would end up ruining the relationship chapter three was a total waste especially the anal shit not worth the time it took to read any of it

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent Beginning

The first two chapters were amazing. The third was excellent in the beginning. Once the gay stuff started that just killed it for me. The romance and storyline were both very well written. Overall the series is wonderful and I hope it continues just with nothing in Aaron's ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

i loved this little series. it was amazing! you did a great and wonderful job writing this!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I totally agree! this was a pretty damn good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Wish there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Oh, dear GOD.

It's shuDDering. Shudder = shiver, shake. Shutter = blinds, or a part of a camera. Please edit accordingly. Bad grammar kills my boner.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

I'm just now noticing that some of the comments were made more than a decade ago. I regret bothering to post comments on the previous section. It's blatantly obvious that nothing more will be coming for this story. Crying shame. It had potential, but just came up short.

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