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All Comments on 'A Darkness Returns to Light Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good Start

Good start for a 1st time author.

I like the humourous tone.

Looks like a fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great Start!

I'm looking forward to his reaction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

great story hope to see it continued soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Ouch out for a to go meal sucks here LOL

Man what a bitch and the she sucks too..

LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
oh boy!

Just Carvers' like ! He just HAS to find Vampires !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
just a comment

whoa, that last part give me shivers, anyway, nice story, look forward to read more

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