All Comments on 'A Daughter's Fantasy'

Great so far, I can't wait for more chapters

brilliant story awesome writing without doubt one very hot horny story.

now i do hope there more to cum. don't stop now you have my full attention.

in more ways than one. out standing exciting and such a real pleasure to read. now what more can i say to get you to start that next parts.

Hottest story in a long time. Very well written, with hints of perversion to come.

Done very well. Couple of grammatical errors, such as (shower scene) she put his cock in his mouth. Always double read or get someone to check for facts. VERY well done though, and I agree, I look forward to more. I am on the volunteer editors program, and will gladly do any checking that you want.

Another great story from you. Can't get enough of your stories. Keep on writing don't ever stop

Very well done. Hope there's a sequel to this story in the near future. Thanks, and keep writing!

Where did you learn so much about cocks? You've got it down perfectly. You are hot, hot, hot. I bet you as hot in the sack as you are on paper; probably hotter.

I'm more of a mother-son type of incest fantasizer, so I wasn't sure about reading your story. But it was very good, indeed. Thanks.

Have just found you on here - and this was the first of your contributions I have read. Enjoyed it greatly - and am looking forward to many more. Have to admit as a father of a grown daughter, one just cannot help fantasising - and this was a good fantasy - keep up the goodwork

love it and my favorite catagory....you even took it to a new level....let these two play some more

Loved the story, leaves me wondering if Carly is actually hoping to get pregnant by daddy and then have a permanent hook into him and a reason to live at home for years to come.

Wow Eroslit you are a very good writer. Keep them cumming and do a sequel to this one please!

Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed it.

What a wonderful lil mind you have my dear...

Amber

Why did he not do oral on her? I love oral.

You got me hard, and kept me hard all through the story. This is my first read. I'll be back!

She conquered daddy just like I took care of my granny so many years ago!

Wow! This story is so hot. I damn near shot off without stroking myself.

When are they going to bring in mom?

What is mom doing on all her trips?

Kinda curious if her dropping out and behavior was all b/c she wanted him for years or if it was a product of her being home all the time.

Glad I found this one. It's the first story of yours I've read. I'll def read more!

Outstanding tale!

Hot story. I've got a s-daughter like that, that I'd like to have like that.

Thanks for sharing.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I would like to have read about him also going down on her. The title just about sums it up. I love sex as I'm sure most men do. I constantly dream of eating out my daughter, by wife's best friend Pat , her daughters Missy and Kim. I am ever fantasizing about slow fucking there older sister Kim. I see other women, and one of the first things I do is stare at their boobs. I wonder how great a fuck they would be and this is while we're in Sunday church services. I even fantasize about women walking across the parking lot at nearby grocery store parking lots, I'm addicted to sex. I read Literotica daily lick my own precum and wonder what my own cum would taste like. But alas, it is all just a fantasy - I have never acted on these urges/fantasies. I just continue to read about outlandish adventures and continue to dream. My wife and I haven't had sex in over ten years, I just don't seem to measure-up, literally. Such is life I suppose.

Like another reader stated, It would have been even hotter if he had gone down on her. He had plenty of opportunity. -dave

An exceptionally well written story... full of beauty, passion and desire... Thank you!

I rarely give 5 stars but you earned it.