All Comments on 'A Daughter's Lust, Restrained'

by Rob_mDear

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stevaroonistevaroonialmost 16 years ago
A better variation on the theme

This works out very well. The tug of war of power, and the way that these characters seem so intensely involved with their own conflicts is vivid.

sirsemegasirsemegaalmost 16 years ago
Very hot!

I loved it. Nice twist on seduction of not touching. Good inner voices between the two. Delightfully evil!

CindysBobCindysBobalmost 16 years ago
outstanding

simply superb. one of the best erotic tales I've ever read...period. you have a wonderful talent, my friend. far better than any other tale I've seen grace these pages.

Bon

alexxxisalexxxisalmost 16 years ago
virtual sex

I spend (waste) a little time on Second Life where the best sex depends on well written description and dialog. I loved the 'virtual' feel to the love making in this story. I wish I had long hair now! Lol.

LaJovenaLaJovenaalmost 16 years ago
Very compelling!

Once I started reading, I couldn't stop! Very well told, effective use of POV, great use of dialogue...BRAVO!

tease_attacktease_attackover 15 years ago
superb! very sensual..

truly erotic.. subtle yet super hot. i can practically feel the heat emanating from them! great story.. keep it up!

tease_attacktease_attackover 15 years ago
superb! very sensual..

truly erotic.. subtle yet super hot. i can practically feel the heat emanating from them! great story.. keep it up!

TigersmanTigersmanalmost 9 years ago
Erotic

I found this story to be very erotic. I could easily visualize everything that was happening as though it was happening to me. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Wow

navelmannavelmanabout 8 years ago
hey genius

this is one of the best

amazing eroticism

kissing

fondling

sucking

and fucking

but not a touch

wooooooooow

how did u even think of this

rated 5

and moving on to the rest of the stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very hot, but...

Loved the premise, the idea of forbidden touch and getting round it, but wasn't bought into the characters enough. They too readily relinquished the norms of father-daughter relationships.

Marvos79Marvos79about 1 month ago

What a story. Holy crap you are great at teasing. This is one of the better stories I have read on here.

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