by Rob_mDear
What a story. Holy crap you are great at teasing. This is one of the better stories I have read on here.
Loved the premise, the idea of forbidden touch and getting round it, but wasn't bought into the characters enough. They too readily relinquished the norms of father-daughter relationships.
this is one of the best
amazing eroticism
kissing
fondling
sucking
and fucking
but not a touch
wooooooooow
how did u even think of this
rated 5
and moving on to the rest of the stories
I found this story to be very erotic. I could easily visualize everything that was happening as though it was happening to me. Keep writing
truly erotic.. subtle yet super hot. i can practically feel the heat emanating from them! great story.. keep it up!
truly erotic.. subtle yet super hot. i can practically feel the heat emanating from them! great story.. keep it up!
Once I started reading, I couldn't stop! Very well told, effective use of POV, great use of dialogue...BRAVO!
I spend (waste) a little time on Second Life where the best sex depends on well written description and dialog. I loved the 'virtual' feel to the love making in this story. I wish I had long hair now! Lol.
simply superb. one of the best erotic tales I've ever read...period. you have a wonderful talent, my friend. far better than any other tale I've seen grace these pages.
Bon
I loved it. Nice twist on seduction of not touching. Good inner voices between the two. Delightfully evil!
This works out very well. The tug of war of power, and the way that these characters seem so intensely involved with their own conflicts is vivid.