All Comments on 'A Day at the Beach'

by jasminia

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talleywitt0071776talleywitt0071776over 14 years ago
rushed

it just seemed like the sex was rushed and some of the language was repetitive. I thought the dream ending was a little cheesy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
NO

You've got to be kidding meeee! Argh, I would be so pissed off by that!

Not only that, but it's such a shame she had to wake up!

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