All Comments on 'A Day at the Races'

by goodnnnight

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don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Snip ruined this story

This story was very erotic until 'the snip' was mentioned. I was hoping that after you shot your cum into her that she would have developed misgivings about it, realizing that she was indeed in her fertile period. You could have continued this story with her getting pregnant but somehow making her husband think that the baby was his, and all the while you continued fucking her and giving this first baby some full-blooded siblings in the future.

I don't quite understand the why and how that those of you that write these erotic stories that you have such a fear of offering accidental pregnancies in adulterious affairs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good story

She sounds a hot milf, can I have her address :-)

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