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by draculess

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cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Short...

But you show a lot of promise. A few spelling errors but nothing a good spellcheck wouldn't fix. Your sentences are short but then my sentences tend to be too long. lol Keep writing, I have and with each one I learn more.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
nice piece of work. please be sure to keep it up. i liked the matter of fact tone. no drama,just

Just the story. A work person

like job. Thank you.

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