by LSEiland
I thought for a second there that Ben was going to hide who he was. I think Elise is going to run for the hills. She is now more confused then ever. Can't say that I blame her but she should at least talk to the guy and find out exactly what he was going through before she write him off. I'm quite sure Elise has some things she doesn't want Ben to know.
Good point, ariesgirl. I think we all bring something suspect to a new relationship, don't we? Nobody's perfect.
Great continuation! I figured that they would meet again really soon when Marco's name was mentioned, but did not see that he would be related to her BFF. So did not see that he knew that she did not like him when he found out who she was. Ready to read more of this story.
Please update soon loving the feel of this story.I also want to give kudos for the well thought out title.
I love a good plot twist especially when the cat is let out the bag in chapter 2 instead of 20 lol
What a great twist!! I have the hugest grin on my face!! Don't disappear for too long pleeeeeeeeeease!! Also like that you write men as being sensual, dominant and a tad intmidating. Very sexy.
I loved the twist and I started reading chapter 2. More and longer chapters please
Well did not see that one coming. Curious as to how you will play this out. Not sure how I would react if in this situation. Well at least he is aware of her dislike of him. So looking forward to reading more.
This is one of the better stories I've encountered on this site! I love your writing style, and your ability to tell a story. Absolute deliciousness!!!!
How does a man of 28 get salt and pepper hair for goodness sake I'm mad confused..........