All Comments on 'A Different Way to Learn'

Title says it all

Constant misuse of there/their, its/it's, your/you're, as well as spelling and grammar mistakes distract from enjoying this story. Find an editor, fix the problems, and then replace the story with the corrected version.

Not really a story, In fact without the little extraneous bits this is right now the way of life for women in Arabia, India, most Asian countries, Africa, and many western countries where immigrants are allowed to practice all aspects of their religion, which religions absolutely depend on the male subjugating the female in all ways. The woman being a possesion rather than a person

The writing style is most unusual, but kind of interesting. But you really need to learn the difference between your and you're. You got it right a couple of times, but wrong at least 3 dozen times. You are = you're, not your. Those errors really distracted from your story telling. But try again, maybe next time it will be better.

AWFUL! HORRIBLE! STUPID! POORLY WRITTEN! GRAMMAR MISTAKES, SPELLING MISTAKES! I GIVE IT A ZZZZZZZZZZ! AWFUL! HORRIBLE! WILL NEVER READ IT AGAIN AND NO ONE ELSE SHOULD BOTHER!

Too clinical for me...

Not arousing at all.