by trixiej
Who the hell is Chris? In the first two chapters, her husband's name was Steve. It was very hard to pick up the storyline.
you'd have to be quite simple not to follow the storyline
That was sum lotion in hand, edge of your seat, man I wish I could read faster kinda shit! Fuckin awesome twist at the end. Extremely well written.
Great work!,
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