All Comments on 'A Dirtier Mind Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
husband's name

Who the hell is Chris? In the first two chapters, her husband's name was Steve. It was very hard to pick up the storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hard to pick up the storyline?

you'd have to be quite simple not to follow the storyline

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wow

That was sum lotion in hand, edge of your seat, man I wish I could read faster kinda shit! Fuckin awesome twist at the end. Extremely well written.

Great work!,

@terrybrown15 (twitter.com)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Had me glued to my screen

One of the best stories I have read!!

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