All Comments on 'A Dish Best Served Cold'

really? definitely a farce.

wow what a story cant wait for part 2 well done and keep up the good work

I look forward to this story continuing and the family winning their business back, Lee & Max(after her divorce to Don) married with kids.

Please hurry with some more of, this Great Story. I am holding my dick in my hand.

I want to make a baby too!! Or just bust a nut. Thanks for shareing this story with us.

too early for buyers remorse, but its on the way. TK U MLJ LV NV

i stopped after she told about the slime ball if i wanted to read shit like that i would read the paper or watch the news or some assinine reality show keep the trash out of the incest area.

just beat the sob to death.

I'm looking forward to more of this. I especially love the ass-tasting kiss she gives that S.O.B. Don. Funny ass hell.

Once more, JB, you have created a storyline that has captured my complete attention. Keep this up and you will be challenging the likes of Ahabscribe, Scouries, and the Baron for top author in this genre.

Thank you for providing us with such interesting plots and characters.

5*****

M51

I debated for a day or so on where to put this story. it obviously crosses several genres, and samples a few more in the future, but the main focus is on the twins' relationship.

I have been criticized in the past for 'dirtying up' my incest stories with 'shit' from other types of erotica. while i personally (obviously) think such criticism is a lot of hooey, i will take heed of the complaints here and post the remainder of this story in the "novels and novellas" section. jb7

good start to a good story, looking forward to the next chptr.

Deserves a score of 6. Look forward to more.

Or "cuckold" Don wait until it comes out he wore a Condom on his Wedding Night. His "humiliation" will be Complete and when Mommy finds out her lil boy sleeps with "hookers".

Ahh, Wonderful start to a great story! I loved it when Lee took her cherry!!!

A bad man getting rekt`d. GG

they were on their way into the kitchen for a sandwich and then in bed? They were talking about what they were going to do and then had already done it?

And, who the heck is Brock?

Many times there was no way to know who was talking, or what they were talking about.

What a mess. It was like you decided to cut it down and left out whole scenes or critical information.

Not for the ignorant like most of the people who commented. Found myself laughing at the halitosis.

There is some promise here, however it is largely overshadowed by the lack of attention to detail, convoluted plot, occasionally nonsensical dialogue and confused identities of the characters.The meaning seems to be lost on the author dooming readers to scratch their heads in disbelief.

south eastern (southeastern)

half closed (half-closed)

e reached (He)

re-located ( relocated)

equipment purposes (purchases)

Sweetie (sweetie)

(-Max) (Lee) snorted (-his) (her) mouthful of milk out through (-his) (her) nose. "You have no idea how right you are, Gram," he laughed, looking at Max who was trying hard not to giggle.

(THE AUTHOR SEEMS TO HAVE LOST CONCENTRATION HERE, CONFUSING THE SEXES OF THE TWINS!!!!)

Fuckitall (Fuck it all)

shoved her tongue down his throat to tickle his testicles (I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THIS!!!! IMAGINE HOW LONG HER TONGUE MUST BE TO REACH HIS TESTICLES FROM INSIDE HIS MOUTH!!!!)

Fall (fall)

heat seeking (heat-seeking)

Hell (hell)

back yard (backyard)

zipper aide (zipper aid) (2)

I do not know who the Anonymous FUCKWIT below is, nor do I have any desire to make his/her acquaintance. They apparently lack any personal abilities in the realm of authorship and any vestige of a sense of humour. I found this work to be, well written; amusing; interesting; erotic and laced with a frisson of 'biter bitten." Oily Don richly deserves all the FUCKING OVER the twins can afford him. Loved it so far and will continue until the end. Great work, keep it up!

Den

Ruined it for me....

Picky, picky, picky Mr. Anonymous of almost 5 years ago. Your comment would have held a little bit more weight if you had an account, and maybe published, with skin in the game. But there you are Mr. anannymouse. IMO, this is a good start to an interesting narrative, and so what, there are mistakes. This author will have the opportunity to improve with the help of other authors with more experience and by readers like yourself but hopefully without your arrogance and lack of tact, if he or she chooses to do so. To bad it’s been five years since your comment and will never see my comment, but hopefully the author and new readers will. Your comment was a cheat shot and I’m sure it made you feel really powerful, and superior.

this is prob one of the most unrealistic stories ever. one even if they have been into each other for years its never going to happen where the sister shows up says she wants you to take her virginity and plot to take out her soon to be husband and then you call your place of employment and say hey btw ima need a few years leave also can you help me?

I love the story a lot. AAAAAA++++++.

Looking forward to see how this develops. Could be interesting, so far a little sketchy, since they may have been able to come with a plan instead of jumping into the wedding. But, we'll see.