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All Comments on 'A Double Moon Event'

by WyldIce

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Grammer

Why is each sentence a paragraph?

HersEternallyHersEternallyabout 11 years ago
never mind the haters

That was brilliant! Loved it! Never mind the other guy who commented about grammar. I prefered the way you wrote it. It was amazing. The pun even made me laugh ~ best one I've ever read. All the work was worth it

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