All Comments on 'A Dragon's Gold Ch. 02: Tharonos'

it's not perfect. it has wild amounts of potential here, and most of it is realized. there's only one problem i really had with this, and it has something to do with fact that you made your dragon into a human form. i would have adored if the dragon stayed as they were.

a true feat of charisma is to make someone want to lay with you even though they may hate your kind. (i love that whole love to hate and hate to love thing.)