All Comments on 'A Dress White Shirt'

I really liked it. It was fun and sexy but also sweet and romantic. Keep up the great work!

What a great loving sexy story. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Too much exposition; it read more like a documentary. In other words, boring.

Would have been just great

with the help of a ruthless editor

at about 50% of its currentl length

Great use of erotic adjectives!!!!

What a yummy situation to explore

Thanks

It was a very romantic story then worked to erotic but then got over the top when you added sally. No more romance just another porn type fantasy story.