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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a wimpy cuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My first love Heather cheated on me at a bar. We were engaged. I had to work late and would meet her after I got off. When I arrived at the bar and couldn't find Heather I asked a friend. Dean told me I should look out in the back parking lot for a red sports car. I did and what I found broke our engagement off. Some guy had Heather bent over the trunk of the red car. I walked up to them and said hey shut we are done I want my ring. Skirt chaser turned around asking who the Hell are you get away. I hit him it the back where I thought was his kidneys were and as he fell I hit him again in the jawhe was down on the ground. I said Heather give me the ring now. I don't want to she said. To bad I thought you loved me but you proved different give me the ring. She did as she was crying. I thanked her as I was walking away. She asked why I thanked her? I said for showing me that you didn't love me enough to stay faithful before we were married and had children. I will count this as a blessing. Good by. Wow that was a close one .my parents had a lot of money and said I should have a prenuptial agreement before getting married but I said no because Heather and I were truly in love and wouldn't hurt one another. Boy was I wrong. Heather kept trying to get together with me but I refused. A few months later I seen her dancing with a guy I didn't know. I was there with a friend Jack for a couple beers. Jack said there's Heather. I looked and seen her dancing with someone I didn't know. I got up Jack said don't do anything stupid. I just walked up and cut in to dance with Heather and it shocked both her and the guy. He asked who are you I should kick your butt. Heather said go have a seat Tom I'm ok I will talk to you later. She just looked at me as we danced. Finally I said I'm glad you are moving on Heather. What the world are you talking about Tom is my cousin and if you would have let me talk to you I could have tried to explain to you what happened that night. I'm sorry I drank too much and let that guy take advantage of me. But he didn't even get my pants down dammit thank you because if you hadn't showed up I may have been raped. If you would have stayed maby he'd been arrested for putting a date rape drug in my drinks but no you left and he got away did you get his license? No I thought he was screwing you. Through my jeans I still had my jeans on. Omv Heather I'm so sorry can you forgive me? Yes if you can forgive me for drinking to much. We still got married and have 4 children and 35 years under our belt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This had happened when my girlfriend Kathy 20 and I 21 were out partying. I had actually ordered a ring and was going to ask her to marry me. While dancing and we had been drinking maby too much. We took a break. Not all that long a friend Eric well used to be a friend asked for a dance Kathy asked me if it was ok? I said sure but don't keep her to long I'll be waiting. Off they went. I thought it would be a good time to use the restroom. When I came back out they were still dancing and I ran into some friends and visited. I talked for a short while and looked watching Kathy and when she looked at me I motioned her. She held up 1 finger. I took it to mean she wanted 1 more dance. I held up the ok sign and turned back to the friends. Then I thought really the band was on break and Kathy had not came to me and I couldn't see her or Eric. After watching I thought maby she went to the restroom so I went that direction. As I approached her sister Natalie came out. Now Natalie was a beautiful girl 19 years old and she flirted with me but I always thought she was teasing being friendly. She always said Tim if you and Kathy split she had first dibs. Natalie said she hadn't seen Kathy other than seeing her dancing with that snake Eric and why the Hell would I let her dance with him? I said he is a friend and what's wrong with just a few dances? Watch him all he is is a skirt chaser. I went on the look and outside I finally found them and all be damned she was bent over a car and Eric humping her.I was walking up quietly and all of a sudden Natalie passed me and kicked Eric in the nuts. He dropped like a lead balloon Kathy screamed. I actually laughed out loud. Kathy looked at us in shock. Natalie grabbed my arm and said come on you don't deserve a cheating b____ like that. Needless to say Kathy and I broke up and Natalie and I started dating we have children 4 children life is great. Before Natalie and I married Kathy apologized for being so stupid and wondered if we could try again? I said I forgive you but no. I said I was afraid that there would be a serious trust issue.

EglefinoEglefinoabout 2 years ago

I have read the comments and not the story jet, but I divorced twice because of the same reason. I tell others I'm married twice to make what happened in the past more positive. I'm married again but only to get my 3th wife an healthy pension and a mortage-free house, if I left the world earlier.

I have a slogan: I am open, honest and sincere towards myself, towards my partner and with some restraint also towards strangers.

Afterwards, there are always people who say, you are just as guilty, because you should have been more careful. That is of course nonsense, you trust your partner, you do not assume the worst case scenario, then you already have a bad basis to maintain a relationship.

Sorry for the translation, I'm not English.

MarkT63MarkT63about 2 years ago

Please tell the readers that you are a CUCK writer!!! Saves us the waste of time reading CUCK shit!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Still a cheater. I would not have been waiting in the room. It actually would have stopped on the dance floor or I would have been in a fight.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I enjoy reading the comments of the people who do not tolerate cheating more than the stories of the dumb cuckolds.

astirastirabout 2 years ago

Good story. Well written. @EnglishAries, sorry about the comments from readers who seek out what disgusts them or makes them angry. Write more, I'll read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

My girlfriend Pam while in college cheated on me. I calledher to let her know I had to work over and would catch up with her at our regular hangout. I thought we were exclusive and was about to ask her to marry me. I even had a ring bought with a promise that I would get a nicer one when we could afford it. When I arrived I couldn't find Pam and when I did I forgot about asking her to marry. Her car was there there she was getting out of the backseat of a car with another guy I didn't know both putting clothes on and straighten. My car wasn't very far so I walked to it opened the door and closed it louder than normal. I glanced back when I heard Pam say OSHIT. I walked on inside and she caught me saying hey babe want to dance with a good looking girl? Not now want to talk? Sure. Let's go outside. I didn't see the guy but the car they got out of was there was. So I walked up to it and sat down on the hood pulled out the box and started. Pam I thought you were the prettiest smartest and most lovely girl I ever met and I was waiting for the right moment to ask you to be my wife but what I seen a little bit ago change it the only way you will ever have this ring is if you or someone buys it at a pond shop. I thanked her for showing her true self that I couldn't trust her. I walked away as she was crying. Little over two years later she came into my office as a sales rep for the company that she was working for. I was pleasant and all business. When business was done she asked me me out to lunch I accepted. I had a 3 hour lunch break no not hot sex. That came later. 22 years later our oldest son is getting married.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

whore and wimp story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great 1st Effort...Add some Anal Sex on the next one or if there is a pt 2...I would have flipped her Cheating Drunken Ass over and Fucked Her Ass All Night...

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

Got to talk to her about it. Got to set some rules. What happened was OK, based on boyfriend's response, but it still needs to be discussed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I hope she gets knocked up, and not by her boyfriend either. Thank gawd for DNA tests.

wd56wd56almost 2 years ago

it starts out really fun with the dance floor and both of them involved then it goes in a direction that was pretty basic. Hope there is another part with her dancing more and her guy is as involved as other people

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I initially like the story but when the boyfriend acted like a stupid loser, you lost me . And the girl acted stupidly too….

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It would be a better read in my opinion if the story continued either with guilt, exceptence or feigning ignorance and the outcome(s)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My girlfriend and I had been together for 7 years. We were together though high-school. Then we went to the same college. We spent almost all of our spare time together. We wer engaged right after high-school and were waiting until after college to marry. I had to have a part time job. Amy didn't her parents took care of all her expenses and spending money. Our senior year of college I was headed to her room I seen Tim my roommate leave what I thought was her room but with the long hall and other students I wasn't sure. He was going the other direction. I didn't say anything to Amy. Tim had transferred to our college for some reason or another. I didn't really care for him that much. Just to much into himself. Two days later I was eating with a good friend and seen Tim come in but it appeared that when he seen me he turned and left. I mentioned that to Bill my friend I was eating with. He said there is something about Tim I just can't trust. Two days later I got the shock of my life. Amy and I were to meet up at my dorm.I got off work early and headed to the room. They were in the shower together. I packed as quickly as possible took my suitcases to the car. Went back in phone in hand and opened the bathrooms door just after I heard the shower shut off. They both screamed whe I took a picture. I said give me my ring you cheating I stopped. She grabbed her left hand with her right as if to stop me.I grabbed her hands and pulled my ring off Tim went to hit me and I slugged him he slipped and fell. Amy your family and friends will be receiving pictures. As I turned to leave she was crying please Wayne stop and talk to me. Tim laughed and said I thought she was a cheating slut. Amy turned and started kicking him in the nuts. Dumb bastard deserved that. I left.I actually didn't send the pictures. I stayed off campus and changed job locations. I managed to not talk to her for 2 weeks. I never responded to any calls or texts. She was waiting for me outside of one of my classrooms and started to me saying how sorry she was and wanted to talk. I said thank you for letting me know the real you before we married. I walked away. While walking I asked how she explained the breakup to her parents? She cried louder. Back home people were on me to forgive her and get back together. I said I already forgave her but how could I trust her. How many times was she with other guys that I didn't catch her. 5 years down the road who was among the people that my boss and I were working out a deal with? You got it Amy. During a break my boss asked what's the deal with me and that Amy woman. I just looked at him. O he said that's the girl you were engaged to correct? Yes I said. Buddy I don't know what all happened but she's in love with you and she sure is smart and good looking. Talk to her you simply shit if she done something wrong she sure wasn't the first and for sure none of us are perfect. A year and a half later we were married. We now have 3 children.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

🐓💩 story. No ⭐s

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

FFS!! So much cuck shit on this site now. Pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I guess some boyfriends are turned on by girlfriends doing swamp donkey try-outs. A well written "hot" story as some would observe, but I would want a sequel snapshot two-years out from marriage. Not such cute behavior then.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Only faggots write stories like this garbage, no self respecting guy could stand by and do nothing, only self hating faggot dream this garbage up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There have been a couple of times when a really sexy guy has come on to me while out with my husband. I’ve snuck off for a couple of blowjobs and even had one very hard fuck in the stall of the men’s room while my husband was waiting at our table. Sometimes being a bit of a slut is what every girl needs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Never mind their negativity. They knew what it would be about from the title and headline. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the story as long as it was me that fucked the ho in the alley. If I was the boyfriend I would have kicked the crap out of the guy flew home and left the slut in New Zealand.

fishgetterfishgetterover 1 year ago

Girlfriend is not the SAME as wife!! A girlfriend has no strings on her that bind her to one particular man. She is really free to be with ANYONE. Period. There should be a separate genre for just girlfriends (unmarried). Then Loving Wives would be only used for WIVES tales.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fucked up story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Whatever, you dude is surely a LOSER !!!

Buster2UBuster2Uover 1 year ago

Yup, that is the kind of GF to have. Gets drunk and as soon as you go to the bathroom she fucks another guy. LOL sounds like real marriage material, as long as you don't care who the father is of your children. She even gives her BF a BJ as penance for her indiscretion. At least she is semi-fair unlike most of these slut stories where they just go out by themselves and get laid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5- (4.6 stars = 92% = A).

Hi EnglishAries,

Over the years I enjoyed reading your public comments.

I am glad you decided to start publishing on Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A CUCK WRITER'S cuck story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fucked up TRAILER PARK TRASH

creampies4evercreampies4everabout 1 year ago

Loved the story. Nothing like a good old-fashioned seduction in a semi-secluded alley where others have an opportunity to watch the action. The story moved at a quick pace. The action developed quickly from the studs finger to his cock and soon Catherine has a nice load of cum in her. She thinks her boyfriend is ignorant of her jaunt so she gives him a nice blowjob to settle him down when she returns.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

EXCELLENT: 100% = A++ (☆☆☆☆☆+).

CATHERINE may or may not be a KEEPER for a random guy, BUT she is a MATCH MADE in HEAVEN for the NARRATOR (boyfriend.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent: 5.0 = 100% = A+ (♡♡♡♡♡+)!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.

Quote:

... I saw her eyes wide with shock as she realized he was cumming inside her but the shock was immediately replaced with pure pleasure and animal lust as her pussy squeezed frantically with her orgasm...

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HighBrowHighBrowabout 1 year ago

Femdom agitprop question: Can you be single and cuckolded?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

We were out partying with friends. Well all but one way friends Anne my girlfriend and I. She was drinking too much and I asked her to slow down. She did for a while. We had danced with each other as well with others. She was dancing with Matt and I was talking to friends and was ready to head home. When I couldn't see her or Matt in the dancing area I started looking for her. There she was. Matt had her up against a wall and was screwing her. I walked over to them. I yelled Hey Asshole. He looked at me and I hit him with all I had causing them to both fall. I turned and walked away. Driving home I didn't answer any calls from her. When I got home I put all of her stuff in trash bags and threw them on the porch. No more than done and lights out and someone was knocking on my door. I had put a prop against the door so she couldn't get in. She had Sally and Jerry with her and all 3 were wanting me to let them in to talk out the problem. I said take your stuff and go. She said I don't have no where to go. I love you please. I said please you are not really that stupid saying that you love me by F*****g Matt go move in with him just get off my property or I will call the law. They finally left.I went to work and volunteered for any overtime when the boss Jim asked. When one night while getting ready to leave Jim sit. I did. He started Dave I heard what happened and I understand that you are pissed off. I said stop please I'm not interested in being in love with a cheater. I was going to ask her to marry me and she cheated I'm happy that she cheated before I asked her to marry me. I said I understand she is your niece and you want to help but I can't do it. I stood and said Jim do I need to look for another job? No I just wish you two could patch things up. A few days later while driving home I seen a jogger and see her fall. She stood and I could tell that she was hurt by the way she got up. Yes it was her. Of course I stopped to help. When she looked at me she gave me that beautiful smile. I asked need a lift? Please she said. My house wasn't only a couple blocks. I asked if she thought that she wanted to go to the hospital and get checked out? No thank you she said. She said that she would put ice on it and give it some time. I pulled into my driveway. She looked at me and said are you sure? I walked around opened up the door picked her up and carried her into my house. Before sitting her in the recliner I kissed her and she returned the kiss. We we let off she said that she was so sorry for being so stupid and I really do love you. I said I love you too. We are married with 3 children.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sounds like she wasn't too drunk to realize her actions and tried to use sex on returning to the hotel room to mask her indiscretion. Sound like pen marriage candidates to me, IF they were married. Otherwise, a firm confrontation and laying out rules are in order. Maybe a pre-nuptial agreement if not married (yet). Such behavior can be understood in a young unmarried couple, but not if married without joint agreement.

sheenakysheenaky12 months ago

I guess he doesn't Really Love her as much as he thinks he does. And that's OK, because it seems that she doesn't Love him that much either. So, I guess it all works out great!

KariOcaKariOca12 months ago

I did enjoy your story. And of course it's quite credible. I was caught fucking a friend's girlfriend an he was not mad at us. I was embarrassed as he just sat near us and said that we could go on.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You ruined a 5 star story, sorry but accepting a cheating woman is not natural any man who would by definition does not have courage honor self-respect or valor, and garners zero respect. Real men feel the same about cucks as we do about pedos and rpists their very existence is a disgusting insult to us and every virtue and belief we hold.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I seen my girlfriend cheat on me.I took some pictures and went home. I thought that we were exclusive but I was wrong. I had actually suspected that something was going on. We had dated for about a year and I was ready to asked for her to marry. I had already bought a ring. I had purchased a house and was figuring to stay in that area. She was from the area. My family was over 3 hours away. I had a job offer and everything was to the better so I accepted. I had been in the area for 5 years and was missing my family and friends. Her cheating made it easier for me to make my mind up. Back to the night that I caught her cheating. Damn me for coming home 2 days early. I talked to my boss the next morning and said that I was headed home to stay and asked if there were any openings? I lucked out it was just like when I moved away from home everything was better again. I applied and was offered the same day.I called a realtor and listed my house for sale and he actually put a sign in the front yard that evening. I was busy trying up things at work and home. She had called both nights and I was short. When she showed up the night I suppose to return she was surprised and had a lot of questions. The main question was I advertising my house for sale. I said that I was moving back home. Why? I had a better job offer and accepted. She asked when was I going to tell her. Tonight if you showed up. Why wouldn't I show up you said you would be home tonight? I didn't know if you would want to be with me. She was really starting to show concern. Now why do you think that I wouldn't want to be here with you? I said stop playing games please. Who were you with at least the last 2 night's? That done it she said I'm sorry but he was an old client and we went out after business and had dinner together and then went dancing. And I asked? That was it she said. I showed her the pictures I had taken. Then I said we are done. Then I showed her the ring. She broke down crying and apologizing. I said sorry but I can't marry someone that can't be true for 4 days let alone expect a lifetime. I moved back home. I for sire don't need to marry someone who cheated before I married her.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

There are 2 comments directly below me that more or less say what I planned to say. The fact that this supposed man gets excited by a guy not only dirty dancing with his girlfriend when the he, the husband's also dancing, but fucking her in the side hallway or wherever. 1 star Bob

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I'm always surprised by the angry and negative responses to these types of stories. Any intelligent person can understand by either the category or description what kind of story and likely result that will be recounted.

So my question is, knowing that you disagree and even judge the fiction, why read it?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved it,it was a great storie always wanted to watch my wife getting fucked

virginislandsvirginislands8 months ago

Very sexy. Loved the story.

SassyCeeCee69SassyCeeCee697 months ago

Awesome! Made me wet and horny!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Looking forward to hearing more about the Adventures of Catherine!!

Helen1899Helen18997 months ago

Wow, so seductively hot. My pussy thought that it was awesome, the wetness was off the scale. If an unknown stranger had slipped into bed has I was reading it, I would have been unable to resist him, I was so hot, anyone could have fucked me 5*

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Sorry but I would have put a stop to it back on the dance floor! No self- respecting man except a hopeless beta would just let that happen! And there would be a very candid discussion once we go home to see if the relationship could continue. This idea that alcohol absolves all sins and explains away bad behavior is crap. If she is that far gone she can’t really enjoy it or participate. If she is not she can still push the guy away a walk away. So she probably isn’t girlfriend/ material at this profoundly selfish period in her life.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good story, some of the comments made me laugh, do these idiots know the genre they are reading?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A nice start but it needs a real finish.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

There would have been one sore beaten bastard found later.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Better to find out what she really is before you get married. Get away from the cheating bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Reality hit me that when this happened to me I was blessed because we weren't married yet. We were engaged at the time. I had known her Marie for several years. Her brother was my best friend. I had to work late that night and she asked if I would mind if she went to a party early and I could catch up later? I said sure. When I got there I was looking for her. I was stopped by several other's while I looked. While talking to a friend I seen Marie and Josh coming around the corner of an out building. Josh was one of the High school jocks that thought he was a king. I excused myself and headed straight towards them. Marie seen me and stopped that brought Josh's attention. I said Marie I think that we need to talk. Josh said hey wuss you owe me I took good care of this little sweet thing of yours. He turned and walked away and I said quietly F*** you ass wipe. He turned and came at me like a bull. I stepped aside quickly and kicked him in the ass. That sped him up and he stumbled into the swimming pool. I laughed and asked Marie are we finished? No. Why? For you being with that asshole that I can't stand. I'm sorry but we were just talking. Really I think I know a little more than that. Well he did try to put his arm around me but I pushed him away. He just kept hanging around and I would move to another group. Asshole stayed away from then on. Dumbass got the message.

6King6King18 days ago

I guess some don't mind slimy seconds. Not my thing.

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