All Comments on 'A Family Affair Ch. 03'

by sexygirl76

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Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowover 11 years ago
Hot story

But try to stay away from the exxxxttteeeeeeeennnnndddeed words, they distract and don't read well. Instead, try to describe the manner of speaking, using descriptive vocabulary.

Farmstud30Farmstud30over 11 years ago
contiune on

as the comments from chapter 2 suggested, a family orge in one bed. I personally don't care for the girl on girl by it self so just skimmed this chapter. Hope the next one is more to my liking and not off on some other tangent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I agree with "Hot Story"

Like this very hot story line but without the drawn out words.

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