by sexygirl76
But try to stay away from the exxxxttteeeeeeeennnnndddeed words, they distract and don't read well. Instead, try to describe the manner of speaking, using descriptive vocabulary.
as the comments from chapter 2 suggested, a family orge in one bed. I personally don't care for the girl on girl by it self so just skimmed this chapter. Hope the next one is more to my liking and not off on some other tangent.
Like this very hot story line but without the drawn out words.