by curious_cait
Totally enjoyed it... your description of the sex was great, including her emotions and feelings as she explored new boundaries... Well done... can't wait for your next one.
Just like the first three installments in this suite, this episode is admirably written. The rhythm is sustained, the dialog is lively and the description of the erotic action is imaginative, detailed and torrid. I look forward to the next episode.
Heartily agree with JWren's comment. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice blow job description with mix of virginal uncertainty and apprehension adding to the tension. So far, the build-up has been steady and their coupling should not rush to a conclusion.