All Comments on 'A Fishing Story'

Very nice job of writing, loved how you developed the story from start to finish, made it very believeable with just the right amout of the "erotic!"

Bill got his just deserts! What a dumb bastard! Kathy deserved better and she got it! If bill wasn't lieing and cheating he could have had a good woman too! I think it was worth a fishing buddy who was a low life to have a faithfull lifetime mate. Congrats Jimmy & Kathy!

Thanks for the read!

Sexmate

The build up was great and that dumb Bill got his just desserts!

This one was a great story, Bill was a jerk... loved the loving wife ending

When the usual cliched story is posted and receives negative comments, invariably someone while post the even more cliched "Why did you come here?" comment. This is a very good example of why I continue opening stories in this category.

It didn't rely on tired cliches. It involved character development. It didn't read like almost every other story in the catetory. It didn't read as of the author had a program that contained canned plot points and characters and let the program create the "story" from the selected elements.

I continue opening stories in this category in the hopes of finding stories such as this.

Skillful display of basic tendencies of normal people in an unusual situation - very well portrayed and with some humor in closing. A very imaginative setting. Entertaining.

Quite talented and largely non-offensive (key). More please.

Sexy and funny. I love stories like this. It's well written, I think. Anyway, I loved it.

Screwing around doesn't pay!!??

I doubt he has to worry about his eggs!![:-))

well...this is a change. We all know the 'normal' stories that are listed here under loving wives. This one...wow.

and you know what 'I' find interesting? The sex they have I really wouldn't say is revenge sex.....it's actual loving sex. I never really liked revenge sex in stories...it doesn't work.

Here it's two people getting together, sort of a cross between romance and erotic. Very Nice!

A plate of gravy with hair.

100 here and 5 there.

But what makes this guy think he has a gem? He already knows that if she thinks she is justified she will cheat.

Great way to start a marriage.

Outstanding in every aspect!

You told it well and took your time to make it work. Loved the ending. I guess that's the romantic in me.

What a fantastic story, well written, great story line formation, excellent ending (mind you I think I'll settle for hard boiled eggs now!)Look forward to more submissions. Keep them coming

What can I say except - FANTASTIC writing! Thanks for sharing your talent.

but a welcome one.

This is truly one of the very best stories I have ever read on this site, and I really only come here for the stroke stories. This was not only hot, but also truly touching. Great job, fireball.

Hot!

It's always amazing how much fun can be had in only a few minutes when the husband is out of the room for a few minutes!

5 of course ! It is worth 1 !

The "writer" should stop spewing this mindless filth and perversion !

Sexy without being crude. A bit risky with Husband so close.

Inept and mindless. One of the worst on this site.

"1*" !!!

Bill was a dumb ass!!! Thanks for sharing.

and the comments are right Bill is a dumb ass

I really enjoyed it. 5* for sure!

need to take up fishing.

you have to find some worms. TK U MLJ LV NV

and eventually they did. It all worked out for the best.

Enjoyed it.

Just pleasure to read. 5***** .

Amazing that some husbands don't appreciate what they have got.

She didn't fuck around she found her soul mate

5 stars.

His ex may have been Jimmy's perfect mate but Bill had been wanting a divorce for ever. He had a smoking hot, younger woman whose Father had big money waiting for him to divorce Kathy and he used Jimmy to get what he wanted. Good riddance to bad rubbish as far as Bill was concerned. He was thrilled to divorce Kathy. And since Kathy wanted out Bill didn't give her much and no alimony at all.

Cheating the cheater. A very good.little stoty. Thanks.

Good believable story, but would have been helpful to understand why wife put up with husband's cheating to begin with. Most wives would not absent damn good reasons.

Women put up with a lot. Until they don't

Interesting how some commenters are ripping either directly or indirectly on Kathy as if Bill cheating on her is her fault? Projecting much?

Thanks for a really fun read.