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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh for a proofreader

Damn that was frustrating: A good story let down. On the last page you wrote, "When Jenny started climaxing Denise stuck one of her let tit into Jenny mouth and muffled the sounds of her orgasm."

Did you mean "When Jenny started climaxing, Denise stuck her left tit into Jenny's mouth and muffled the sounds of her orgasm"?

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 11 years ago
jENNY is a fantastic reason for a party!

Jenny, Ann and Denise (her sensational party) are beautiful woman plus the author, 10991099, the only guy, have a goingaway strip poker orgy for "shy" Jenny! What a great story with great descriptions of all the different erotic moments leading to the grand finale sex scene where everyone gets way off. I enjoyed it personally and hope everyone who reads this gets off like I did! FANTASTIC PARTY STORY!!

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