by Beejayne
I might have rated this higher but since I don't read French I missed half of what it was about.
Adding the French to it gave you the feeling you were in France.
I can't wait till your next story comes out.
This is your best story yet! Sooo sexy. Sooo sophisticated and well-written. Lenny and Gil are forever burned into my memory. You have written a great erotic story, and I enjoyed the travelogue as well.
All I was able to determine is that Lenny is not opposed to paying up and Karl likes it as well. Such people do not excite me. No story in evidence aside from that. And bareback with a Frenchman?
I liked your story very much, really hot. Looking forward to read the second part