All Comments on 'A Friend in Need'

by Edge23

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MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago

What category would this be under? Sci Fi???

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Mysterious

I admit that it was too short for me to get into it, but I really liked your style.

Good luck to you in the contest.

sacksackover 17 years ago
delightfully different....

One could argure that there are too many loose ends, and the ending was a bit abrupt. This could use a bit of editing (misspelled words, stray period, etc.)However, well off the beaten path and is stronger thereby.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Distrubing tale!

This writer has written a very clever story one that is perhaps purposely vague yet a very interesting read. I found myself unable to slow down until the end. The character, Wilford Pimm will always remain a mystery to me even though I found him a fascinating read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
This

intriguing story is written in the style of H P Lovecraft,and,like his tales leaves more questions than answers.Enjoyed reading it.

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