All Comments on 'A Full Moon Phase'

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MizT over 12 years ago

Just found this story today and am trying to catch up all at once so I'll leave a better comment then. Going to chapter 2 right now!

SizzlinSis over 12 years ago

I'm in the same boat as MizT. . .

Captivated by what i've read so far - off to read the next chapter!

Anonymousover 12 years ago

really intriguing....

off to chapter 2 like the rest!

Passion_Pen over 10 years ago

Great job.

I truly enjoyed this story. The characters were vibrant, and the descriptions were rich.

Dialogue was great. Too often I read stories with bad dialogue or worse: none at all!

Found some run-on sentences, and some other minor technicalities that could be fixed with a touch more editing. There was nothing terrible though.

I'm on my way to read more!

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Things you might want to know about my submissions: First, I think I should have spelled my user name maxIcue to clarify its meaning, Max-IQ, though the phallic I in the former brings out the double meaning in the name (i.e long cue stick) I meant the IQ thing to be ironic b...

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