All Comments on 'A Gift in Disguise Ch. 07'

really nice to see you back on this story. I thought there is a tad too much technical discussions and lesser plot/sex/character development going on.

Although the lengthy duration between chapters lends some justification to the repetition of the background, we don't need to be constantly reminded that he had to put the hospital gown on with the opening to the front. The inclusion of technical info certainly displays the author's understanding of a wide range of science including nano-engineering and biomedicine but I wonder if this doesn't put readers who don't have the same grasp of the subjects off somewhat. Still I hope that successive chapters are not unduely delayed: sometimes it is difficult to remember what stories are being read and which aren't.

great story to read. very enjoyable too. hope to see more of this story soon.

I hope you finish the story it's good and a great read

To those who have commented both anonymously and pseudonymously, thank you!

Thank you for taking the time to read what I wrote and then submit comments.

As much as anyone else, I understand that sexual themes are the main reason for reading a story on Lit. However, what I am trying to inject into the stories with the admitted technobabble is some kind of plausibility. Sex has context in real life -- it rarely happens in 700 words or less. I am trying to leave readers thinking, "That could have been me," or even, "I wonder if that's true or if he's just making that up to enhance the story."

Regardless, my thanks for your comments are sincere.

Talespin