All Comments on 'A Girl Called Shine: In Command'

I just love the details of your love making. You sure know what you're talking about! Great stuff.

You didnt put Chapter One in the Title. That was a mistake right?

i would like toread about how shine got her first taste of pussy and how she seduces other older women.

This really needs more chapters. The build-up and seduction was great. Now that Shine has the older womans attention, you should write more chapters with Shine controlling the older woman and making her do things she never ever thought about. That would be great and so erotic.

Damn, that was literally, fucking good