All Comments on 'A Glimpse of Control'

So Terry is the emerging cuckold and Gail the slut wife--interesting!

But where does that leave Abbie?

The story begs for a sequel--or two--or many more.

It's a 5 star story line with many sub-plot possibillities, so keep it coming.

well written.

A great story, very well written!!

Please keep up the good work

Just give her the divorce she deserves and be done with it.

This was an interesting start to the story. I like the idea of witnessing Abbie discover her own desire to dominate and control a man. I think the tension between her desires and her upbringing would be very exciting. It would be wonderful to see her slowly given to her desire to control a man and assert her own needs above his.

OK, bad grammar early on makes a story hard to read. So check this: "Despite being a good 7 or 8 years younger than her, she felt herself drawn to him. He was a few inches taller than her, with a cute face and a naïve charm that made him seem caring."

What? Do you see what's wrong with that snippet? Watch this: "Even though ZAK was a good seven or eight years younger than SHE, ABBIE felt herself drawn to him. He was a few inches taller than SHE, with a cute face and a naïve charm that made him seem caring."

I mean, c'mon ...

Thanks...sexy story...got me in the mood rather quickly.BJH

made me nice and hard reading this. I want to be Terry