All Comments on 'A Good Workout'

This was a great "quickie" that was highly charged. As a bonus, you're also a very strong writer, with an almost poetic sense to your prose.

But there are a couple of things that threw me off as a reader. There is no background to your characters, and while that maybe a moot point on most stories, this one demands some explanation since you suddenly allude half way through the story that the two have a history. It's a jarring transition.

Still, it doesn't dillute the steamy sex in any way. Great writing.

Why'd it have to end so sooooooon????