by TE999
Nicely polished with great dialogue. Professionally written. The theme is old but you made it new. Good job.
CBS
Loved this story a lot. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
That was good Tom, an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.
DG
That was a great read. I think you use your dialogue better then most writers on Lit and it creates feeling of realism that draws the reader in. Good luck in the contest
The Dean needs to talk to the chair of the Women's Studies Department at Central University. She'd have "fixed" him. :D
I really enjoyed reading this story. Hope you do well in the contest!
A good read, Tom. I really enjoyed it. The mini-epilogue at the end really clinched it.
I liked how she slid along his cock before she rode him the last time... good image.
This was a really sweet sotry, and quite erotic. I like the way you do the dialogue, and I also like the happy ending.
Liked the way you wrapped it up at the end with the two getting married and dedicating the park together :-) Good luck in the contest :-)