All Comments on 'A Hard Climb'

by TE999

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AlexysQuinnAlexysQuinnabout 15 years ago
Cute . . .

Good luck in the contest.

CarBuffStuffCarBuffStuffabout 15 years ago
Professionally written

Nicely polished with great dialogue. Professionally written. The theme is old but you made it new. Good job.

CBS

Austin8Austin8about 15 years ago
Good story

Good luck in the contest

DesertPirateDesertPirateabout 15 years ago
That was fun!

This was a very good and enjoyable story. Good luck.

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 15 years ago
Wonderful

Loved this story a lot. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

DG HearDG Hearabout 15 years ago
A nice fun read

That was good Tom, an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.

DG

Jack_SamuelJack_Samuelabout 15 years ago
Good story

That was a great read. I think you use your dialogue better then most writers on Lit and it creates feeling of realism that draws the reader in. Good luck in the contest

voluptuary_manquevoluptuary_manqueabout 15 years ago
NIce!

The Dean needs to talk to the chair of the Women's Studies Department at Central University. She'd have "fixed" him. :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story

I really enjoyed reading this story. Hope you do well in the contest!

SweetWitchSweetWitchabout 15 years ago
As always

A good read, Tom. I really enjoyed it. The mini-epilogue at the end really clinched it.

pleaz_mepleaz_meabout 15 years ago
Nice!

A good short romance. Nicely done!

RubiSliprzRubiSliprzabout 15 years ago
sliiiide

I liked how she slid along his cock before she rode him the last time... good image.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101about 15 years ago
Sweet

This was a really sweet sotry, and quite erotic. I like the way you do the dialogue, and I also like the happy ending.

DevilOrAngelDevilOrAngelabout 15 years ago
Really liked the story

Liked the way you wrapped it up at the end with the two getting married and dedicating the park together :-) Good luck in the contest :-)

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