All Comments on 'A Helping Hand'

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptabout 13 years ago
Nice.

I really liked this story. Keep up the good writing.

stockingngarterloverstockingngarterloverabout 13 years ago
Great story

Loved it, fun without any domination. a great fantasy

toni49toni49about 13 years ago
love it

what a wounderfull storie

sally_spandexcdsally_spandexcdabout 13 years ago
MOMs are so great

OH MY GOD Alicia...WOW what a story. I knew it was going to be good but Baby I had no ides what was coming.I too had a very special Love with my mom due to her always wanting a girl but got a girly boy instead . You had it all Babe, and I love all the details of sucking and fucking that BBC and while you got pounded by it I had a BB-dildo doing the same to me and with it being held in by my pantyhose IT just got better and better...PLEASE HURRAY WITH THE NEXT PART,,, But hey when is Dad going to get in one this hot little sluts action...KISS KISS Sally

cellestercellesterabout 13 years ago
Amazing

best story i've read yet i love the feminization without the domination and wish i had a mother like that. Please continue with more stories like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
best

Ive read several of your stories and find them super hot,cant wait to read the next one.I'd love to meet the main character

sally_spandexcdsally_spandexcdabout 13 years ago
2nd READ as good as the first

Anyone that can read this and not be horny as hell should move on to a different type story because this is one hotter than hell story. Such a hot little cock craving lil slut Mom has helped cum-out.. Like Mom like sissy gurly son..Very sexy indeed..Id love to hear of a sexy gangbang with MOM and Alicia with Alicia eating and slurpping up all of MOM's cream pies while getting her sissy pussy pounded buy one big cock stud after the other...There is just something about eatting Mom's slimmy pussy that can't be equalled.. I have already cum 3 times with both reads but 4 isn't far off..........KISS KISS Sally

domehard19domehard19over 12 years ago
amazing

what a great story, i would love to have the oppurtunity to be alicia. i shot the biggest load reading this. how about a part 2

MichelleWhoIsMichelleWhoIsover 12 years ago
Outstanding story

I've haven't read a story like it. You combined transformation, incest and a bit of bdsm all in one story. I just couldn't imagine this being a stand alone story. I hope that we will be seeing more of her as time goes on.

Johnboy9Johnboy9over 12 years ago
Really great story, but I have a concern...

As it seemed Danny/Alicia's Father was not out of the picture during this time of transition, as in, say, overseas on business, and in fact seemed to be home for dinner each night, where was he when all this was going on between Danny/Alicia and Becky? I mean, Becky and Alicia had dinner and breakfast together, Alicia slept in Danny's bed and walked around in revealing lingerie at all times when he wasn't going out and a corsett and slutty clothing when he was. He lounged around the pool in very revealing clothing. How could the Father not have noticed? Did he even notice that Danny was never home anymore, that there was this girl, Alicia, who was there, instead?

You really should have done something with the Dad, either included him in the story, or sent him away until the party, and then at the end of the party, have had a revelation where he finally saw just how his wife solved her serving problem for the party. If he got upset at what she did to their only son, you could have had Alicia drop down and give him a great blow job. Or maybe at the party, after returning from his overseas business trip, he got his first look at Alicia and seeing how beautiful and slutty she looked, took her into the back room like everyone else had done, and after having done the dirty deed, only then found out that he had just screwed his son.

The story was really great, but leaving the dad out of it so completely left a big gap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
fem,d

so loved your story. wish mommy made me be girl

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Big dildo

I read your story and had to bury a big black dildo in my ass/pussy as far as it would go. I was wearing panties and I'm shaved all over just like you. I had used that dildo before but never buried it all the way, its real long and thick. It took some time before I good put it in but now its easy. I felt so good and full when I buried it all the way. I want to read more of your stories.

ratty9ratty9over 11 years ago
where's dad

would have been nice if daddy had got in on the act especially if he did not realise he was fucking his own son

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Please keep going

You had me so intranved in this story. It wasn't rough like they usually are and the Alicia character was very sexy. I loved how she turned to men. Hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
it feels good with it in me

i know how good it feels with a man cums in me the story was great

Tootight1Tootight1almost 10 years ago
wow

good story, a bit of too fast, 1 week, going from first panty to total fem, and gang fucked at a party. along with all the rehearsal at home and dad not suspecting a thing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Loved it!

You write great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Lucky Alicia

Great story! I came hard! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I really Like the Idea and the Reason for this Story it's Just that the Incest Parts Sort of Ruins for me a little, whenever an Incest Part comes out as Enjoyable as it is to Read it sort of took me out of the story a little. Specially in Terms of Character Unfortunately Includes the Parts Involving the Mother Handing Her Son (The Reader) her Wet Panties, in addition to the Mother/Son Masturbation Scenes. They Don't Feel like they Fit for me again still Enjoyable to read just seems Out Of Place fir what you where Going for in the Beginning of the Story, which should have been the Son (The Reader) being forced to dress Fem to Help His Parents Out.

ColonelinguistColonelinguistabout 1 year ago

I totally enjoyed your description of Danny’s willingness to be transformed into Alicia by Becky. The fact that she was his mom,with a pretense that she only doing it because she needed a maid for their party, established her identity as a neurotic nympho MILF, as well as an excellent instructor in feminization was crazy hot!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Wow just wow hot, hot, hot 😍😍😍😍

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