All Comments on 'A Hero's Return Pt. 02'

the new cuck wanna be authors writing cuck lovers trash

1 star

She probably has learned and she will likely be good from now on - but sheeeit!

Well why does this blow snot bubbles and die as a story.

1 daughter phones mom which she hated? to tell about dad? while she was living with the other guy?

This is written by a woman only thing i can think of, it is so hard to follow and poorly written. Or a pro-cuckold like MM(which is a woman)

MEN stop listening to your females about plots, it is like listening to a cat talk about feelings(that makes no sense..my point is made)

First, you have no clue how to punctuate. Makes reading the story difficult.

Second, you flop back and forth between the husband's story and the wife's, with no demarcation. Very difficult.

Third, the predictable nature of the arc makes reading this dreck unnecessary.

..well, its time you go back to your school and demand money back. They obviously couldn't do anything with a low IQ trash like you. But I digress.

The story is excellently written with a great deal of promise for the future.

Good luck, and thank you for a wonderful story.

1 star wurth less crapola, blah, blah meaning nothing same as the crap tello.

1 star

I am sure it it mostly a method for cowards to safely voice their opinion without the ability for reprisal. Of course there is no method to prove it but I would bet that over 95% of Anonymous posters have not only never served in the Military but more that that have never experienced combat.If so the entire tone of their posts would be different. One last thing, why do you feel the need to bash the author's for something as mundane as the way they punctuate their stories for God's sake. Remember this, they write these stories for your enjoyment and if you feel you could do better then leap right in and let it fly.

To my fellow Marine Brothers I just say "Semper Fi". To my other brothers in arms I just say "Thank you for your service.

To "callmesparky" just say, Keep on keeping on ...

7.3% of americans have served in the military (all branches)

So your statistics are close FOR ALL commentators on this site.

Do you believe that by having a username on an erotic story website makes you more of a man than an anonymous poster who has also served their country?

I know of one anonymous poster who served in a frontline infantry division and was involved in active service in a warzone.

for all any of us know kansasjack could be a 15 year old boy with delusions of grandeur.

As for the story, well written and i will vote after i read the last chapter

I agree with kansasjack about the slime ball anonymous commentators. I'm sure their mothers would give them a good thrashing if they knew what their spotty teen sons were up to.

Such a good read but very emotional. I'm not meant to cry here!!

Don't let her back in. 6 months of fucking another man while you're serving your country makes her a first class slut, no matter how bad she feels.

My comments on the series will be after I read part 3.

As for the folks above, if you want accurate statistics, go to th Fedaral Agency that provides "Compensation Benefits" (monetary psyments to veterans with service-connected injuries), and which provides medical care for them. Go to:

http://www.va.gov/PURCHASEDCARE/aboutus/news/archive/Americas_Wars.pdf,

which is a Fact Sheet by the VA for the numbers of KIA, non-battle deaths, and so on in all of Amerca's wars. Then note that as of the date of that fact sheet in 2014, there was still one living child of a Civil War veteran. That person is tracked by the VA because he or she became disabled before adulthood, and has been receiving compensation by VA ever since becoming disabled. So the agency that is actually sending the checks out to the widows, widowers and children may have a more accurate count than a Website anyone on the planet can edit.

He went out with his men ... majors don't have men. When one speaks of one's men it refers tk people under one's command. Commanders are CPTs at company level, LTCs at battalion, COLs at brigade and so forth. MAJs are really staff posifions. Yes, as an XO or S3 he may have some staff soldiers under him, but they would not be directly engaging in combat ops. If he was going out on missions one has to wonder why he wasn't at his actual place of duty and why his CDR allowed this. If he took his staff personel on a combat op because he needed to keep his mind off his problems and they became casualties then he should be looking at a court martial.

I saw one comment complaining about his rank, who cares, may not be normal to go out with his men but possible. I normally do not like the let her back in your life either but sometimes even if she was a slut, she was a slut you loved and still love so........you cannot help what your heart tells you to do.

I think most of these commenters must be CPAs cause everything has to be exact to fit in their world. I guess I am more of a ditch digger, if it is off a tad hair here or there no problem. Keep up the good work, and thank you for the stories.

Lost 2 *'s just for the last 3 lines. She made her decision and now she should have to live with it.

Good S2s and S3s , G2s and G3s travel to the various units subordinate to the commander on whose staff they serve, by hummer if need be, to do their job, to personally obtain necessary intel and assertain that ops plans are properly issued and understood. He is the commander's extra set of eyes and ears obtaining on site intel as well as information regarding unit moral, readiness and capability and speaking with his voice to carry out his will, not just sitting back in a rear area generating reports and plans.

He could be a Company Commander as a Major. It doesn't happen often but people do get promoted while in Command. There are also rare company commands that are specific to Major's as well.

Now that the Major is injured he will need someone to care for him. The cheating ex can do all a nurse could do. Maybe even bring him a woman when his needs return. You know for sure he will never touch that slag cunt again. Damn.

Not about the story, but about the back-and-forth perspective switch between Bob and Kathy.

It would have been MUCH BETTER if the author kept using demarcation line to signal the switch, as he did at the start of the story.

Without it, sure, you could still figure out who was talking. It was just annoying for no good reason.

That's all I have to say for now.

I missed this on the chapter 1 comment:

She acknowledged still sleeping with the mayor and maybe getting married to him despite claiming to get back together with Bob and then has to ask if they were done after getting the divorce papers. Clearly she is written as an imbecile or the story is ridiculous.

Then in chapter 2 she goes back to the mayor after he forgives her? While still loving Bob and wanting to get back with him. Again she is either an idiot or the story is ridiculous.

I'm still waiting (dreading) for the RAAC. This woman is written as someone who somehow became a slut after 18 years. Did she have a stroke? Get hit in the head? How can this happen? The explanation given so far is completely unreasonable unless she didn't love Bob. Perhaps she always slept around and didn't change at all.

She blames the mayor for being a wife stealer. I'm sorry but all she had to do was say "No". It is totally her fault.

And she still claims to love Bob even after treating worse than cow dung. Ridiculous! Bob was right... She loved the idea of being married and the lifestyle, not him.

Wow!! is all I can say. I stopped reading after the conversation with her daughter. I'm jumping to the third part and see how it starts. This woman really takes the cake. Her way of doing damage control really is something else. she goes back to her lover after her husband caught her red handed? And then has the gall to boast to her daughter that she had moved to another state to be with her lover? And she still claims to love her husband more than her lover? Wow. Some damage control. All she has been doing so far is to alienate her husband and her daughter from her. and of course her friends and family. And she see's nothing wrong with what she's been doing. Of course the cuck hisband might just take her back. Hope not.

Wow...wbat rancid shit! This is fucking horrible. You have A wife who's so selfish and narcissistic she clearly needs medication to function in society. And maiming the Husnand line that and having him allowing his Ex back? Fuck you, CallmeSparky!!!!

Now I know why I dislike Sparky's stories so much. Is Sparky Kathy's dog? Did he shit all over the keypad, and she pressed 'submit' at the result?

Chapter two was not as good as one, but still pretty darn good. As a staff officer, I often travelled between companies in a humvee. A few times our convoy suffered IED attack. I was fortunate enough not to be directly involved, but did see injuries as described in the story. Probably headed for RAAC, but everyone except ex mayor Connelly has suffered enough for one life time.

then you have lost it. no way in hell would this bitch ever be forgiven. useless cunt

to all those shouting that Bob should keep his anger for Stacy have probably never totally loved another person whether it is a child, sibling, wife or even just someone you think of as a very close friend. Anger only destroys.

I very rarely give five stars for an unfinished story. And, although I doubt Part 3 will rate a five, this middle piece does rate five stars. Does she deserve reconciliation? Absolutely not. But, does the Major deserve the opportunity to save his once-beloved wife? Positively.

could be told thousands of times when war-time separation tears up famlies, friends and loved ones, Just like the commenter whose comments are being put into cold storage. TK U MLJ LV NV

I don't get all the RAAC shit. There a are over 1.5 million married Sailors, Soldiers and Airman. The fucked up truth is about 36% have to deal with whores, skanks or just straight up sluts. Its bad enough dealing with the separation, then you add the fact the she/he can't keep the legs closed or keep in their pants. She made her choices and some how you try and justify everything by him getting injured to cause the RAAC. I call Bullshit, because I only know a few service members that even allowed the cheater in the room. And those few only did it to tell them to got to hell.

pick a POV and stick with it. flipping back and forth gives your readers whiplash.

As a real man whose daughter still needs him because she won't live with the cheating, skank whore who calls herself a mother would be very careful to get home safely. The writer has stated that Bob will do anything to protect his daughter but then turns right around and contradicts that statement with recklessness.

Again, please don't let this drift into a point less raac.

She cheated and cheated and cheated and on and on

He saw and heard No

I see you are making your fantasy military hero a cuck. What a disgrace.

Still one of the better deployment cheating stories around.

Sigh

Daughter

WIMPY CUCKOLD

"I think Mom just got lured away by a very bad man who wooed her and would not take no for an answer." Brilliantly justified.

Awww crap! You had a great story going here, but you are obviously going to fuck it up by turning it into just another pathetic RAAC story.

I have to agree with anonymous from 4/3/21.

I read the comments about this and agree with most. However I noted,early the cuck writer carvohi offered some miserable info. That author believes that wives should always be forgiven and any man that takes hard action is wrong or lack character. U can read it in profiles, so the lengthy paragraph offered by that writer is total wimp cuck pov. This story unfortunately is also in that category, so sad.

Bullshit. "you know that I ended up following Donald Connelly when he left town don't you?" GAME OVER.

Meh... Turned a mediocre story into a worse one. Trying to blame Bob for being gone as the reason she cheated repetitively. What's her excuse for going back to the other guy right after being caught and still having sex with him? Does that seem like the actions of someone who is remorseful or trying to make up for her past deeds.

Lol. This seems to be another RAAC piece of filth. This author, Carvohi, and other authors clearly have no self-esteem. They will be forever miserable as the person their companion takes advantage over and over. Not a way I would care to live, but I guess some people have to be miserable.

Reading the passionate comments here, and in other RAAC Loving Wives stories leads me to wonder whether LW category should be split into two.

BTB and RAAC.

I do understand the vitriol many comments. For the sake of a good story the author creates an evil loathsome character that readers hate. So when the protagonist overlooks all her faults and reconcile, we all feel cheated somehow.

This leaves many readers infuriated and frustrated.

I often feel cheated coz by such stories. If I had known they were RAAC I probably would not have read them coz deep inside I want the wronged party to be the victor. This is fiction after all and not real life. In real life we seldom see the innocent victim win. Far more memorable is when "the baddie" wins and the innocent suffer. We want to forget that and see a fictional world where "good triumphs over evil"

Sadly good writers who can create an evil character and have readers feel hatred towards her will sadly suffer the scorn of many readers.

I mean after all said and done, we did pay good money to read this literature. We expect good value for money. lol.

No. She turned 180 degrees. Don't buy it!!!! !!!!!

I can understand the negative reaction to the reconciliation but in real life a deep love will overcome the adversity of a cheating spouse. It did for me and that was 45 years ago. We both remember and the pain and sadness is something we share to this day along with a great amount of love.

If you decide to write any new stories please enroll in a refresher English Lit course to rediscover the basic rules of essay preparation.

Since I laid out the pure shit you delivered in the first part lets start with this (onyl because everyone will cheer at what a great writer you are, when you are not) "My reporter friend called me that afternoon to tell me that Connelly had packed up and left town leaving no forwarding address and that my soon to be ex-wife hadn't gone with him."

Yet page one of this mess clearly states "Stacy, you know that I ended up following Donald Connelly when he left town don't you?"

Sorry I wont bother continuing reading this horrid pile of idiocy beyond that line, because you obviously expected the reader to be dumber than a MAGA rally chump, clearly many are, but anyone paying attention would be offended at this mess.

The world of the discriminating reader does NOT miss you.

What a powerful story!

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This story is the exact opposite of what should happen. The cheater is suppose to suffer consequences for the their shitty selfish entitled decisions. But oh no, this author feels the cheated upon spouse should suffer all the pain and consequences of his wife's cheating and betrayal. Its a prime example of White knight syndrome . White Knight syndrome is a term used to describe someone who feels compelled to “rescue” people in intimate relationships, often at the expense of their own needs. Such behaviors stem from a mindset that perceives the other sex as weak, dependent, absolved of all responsibility for their outcomes, and thinks that she will dedicate herself to loving him because of his help. In this case the author is "saving" Kathy and absolving her of her shitty behavior.

It seems as though most commentators are reacting to the story as if it were real. It’s not!

In this story it looks like she’s become very remorseful-—for what she did, not just sorrowful at how she hurt herself—and is seeking at least a verbal forgiveness from her husband.

There’s a hymn that goes “I SAW THE LIGHT”. SEEMS LIKE THIS CAN BE APPLID TO HER.

(Don’t ask me how I got a caps Lock on my iPad)

I’m looking forward to the next part no matter which way it goes from here. Great writing!

Bill S.

Second time through and this is truly bad

I hate it.. It should have ended in chapter 1... Cause now, author will make MC get back with her... After all the pain she caused, after he lost a leg, 3 fingers and a ear, she will come to his life as if she never did all those things to him and his daughter... She deserves to suffer! But no! Author just make the good guy suffer a lot more in this horrible and sordid affair! How I wish that every cheater suffers imensity...

Yada yada yada

You made her unforgivable in both chapters, even going so far as having her return to the cheater AFTER her confession, and now you want to try and sell the readers a reconciliation? A very bad idea

Look her letter was heartfelt. But so what? The affair was like five months (sexual), 2-3 times a week. That is already beyond the pale. But then she goes back to the asshole predator after the reveal and her confessing what happened. That makes zero sense. And that is not remotely an act of contrition. Yeah she finally figured out the predator was an asshole. So what? After how long. Just completely invalidates any attempt at forgiveness, let alone reconciliation. A multi month affair while he is facing persistent danger overseas in a war, is the height of betrayal. If the author wants to even approach forgiveness or reconciliation, then lighten the betrayal. 5+ months, with some initial guilt, but then thinking she did nothing wrong? Meh that it is absurd. Not saying it doesn't happen. But absurd in the sense of any possible relationship going forward. She made her terrible choice repeatedly. Yeah she laments it miserably now and knows what she lost. But you reap what you sow. And her harvest has turned out rotten.

This author clearly does not have sufficient insight or life experience to write competently on this topic. He has a very poor understanding of concepts such as love, commitment and duty.

Yeah, not going to bother reading pt. 3.

Gets busted, goes to lovers house, doesn't communicate except to ask for her BIRTH CONTROL PILLS!?!

And then follows her lover out of state. True remorse there.

Why the fuck would the daughter even call her?!?

Just, blech.

I smell a CUCK story in the making...

A little sappy.

Tragic. Too little too late? Still humble pie helps the forgiveness pill. There but for the sake of God, men die?