by EnCarta
I really liked the part with Mrs. Jackson and Mrs. Goldstein, but the part with Ben and his wife was not as good as your great stories usually are...
Great stories! Let's have Ben getting deeper and deeper.....or maybe Mrs Ford comes back?
I have to agree with my previous writer that a "comeback" of Mrs. Ford would be great. She's my favorite character of your stories (close before Luisa & Amanda from "The Tryouts", Monica from "Attack of the College Mom" and Debra from the "the Boss's Son" stories - all of those stories were absolutely "sequel-worthy"! ;) - [please excuse my mediocre english, i'm not a native speaker]
This has been a great story. Please finish it.
They have to be setting Ben up for a fall
This story is over the minute his boss grabs his balls. You grab a man there, he knocks you on your ass. Try it once and find out what happens to you. The lawsuit would have finished her and set him up forever. No story - none.
You've captured him perfectly. A complete shite. Seems to not learn, ever. Hope you fix him good in another chapter.
his is a pretty good story. It would be nice if you could find the time to complete it some time.
So the guy who's trying at work to be faithful to his wife but is coerced into having sex while trying to say no ... deals with that by fucking his wife's mouth while she's passed out, and then fucks her again in the morning with no consent, and furthermore she is saying "no?" This guy is raping her, so he's not *just* a douche-bag, his behaviour is abusive and criminal. This story should be in Non-consent/Reluctance, at least.