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Click hereBut sometimes the other side turns out to be a whole lot better than you'd dared hope. It did for me, anyway, which is why I need to finish this, and get up to the bedroom. See, the woman I subsequently married was looking especially hot tonight: we made a date for the end of the evening, and I don't want to be late. Carmen can get a little impatient when she's horny and you keep her waiting . . .
[If you can, please vote and/or comment. The feedback is much appreciated! Thanks, Joey.]
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Anonymousover 17 years agoI think this is the best story I've read on this site. Having been in some complicated situations romantically myself, I can really relate to the intensity of the emotions brought up here, and yet the emotions do not in any way make the story less hot. The depiction of the sex in the story is really well done because it avoids a lot of the cliched porn phrasing and the stupid ego-trip stories where girls are orgasming constantly with basically no effort from the guys.
The story is both extremely hot, and very realistic which is a difficult combination to achieve, and really a pleasure to read.
Anonymousover 17 years agoExcept for the glamorous ending this is a predictable fall out between people who really don't lose their spouse as much as they selfishly gave them away.
Although, had there been any real respect and love there wouldn't have been a story.
Anonymousover 17 years agoI remember those situations well from that period. When you swap, sometimes the "dish runs away with the spoon" so to speak. In a swap sometimes the swappers learn that they had been with the wrong partner all along. This happened in my own circumstances. After a night of key clubbing, my wife and I had a spat about a week later and she proclaimed, "_______ would sure not treat me that way." Then from me, "well bitch, don't let the door hit you in the ass on the way out." You go be with the worthless son of a bitch, and we'll both be happy. She did. Three months later after ______ had tried to get her to whore for him so he could buy dope, she came home and begged forgiveness. I did. That was 43 years ago. Those times were what she now refers to as when we were crazy.
Good story. I can relate.
Steve Orshonover 17 years agoExceptional writing ability coupled with good pacing, and of course, hot sex makes this an excellent read. A rather sad close kinda cooled me off. Looking for more submissions from Joey.
sparky11point5over 17 years agoThis is a very good story and well-written. I liked the pace, dialogue, and emotional aspects. Writing about real life is much harder than many of the unbelievable fantasies related here.
