All Comments on 'A Job For Kelly'

. . . a rather lame ending. just a bit too cold for my taste. but still a good story.

I kept thinking, isn't there a less prosaic setting than a housecleaner being screwed by a client? And we never learn why the client is so comatose (or why the wife left). Just a tip in writing short stories, Dylan: stay with the chief character's point of view.

Nice to stay with her point of view, but can see the possibility of switching back and forth - the lure of him as the silent, deep unknown as it were. Hope we'll get more!